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by vinery on May 30, 2015, 05:28:20 PM
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Kisi bahaane ishq tujhse ho liya,
Tujhe chahne se dil mera ro diya,
Tujhe paane se pehle hi tujhe kho diya,
Ab dard bhara jeevan ho liya.
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«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2015, 07:13:45 PM »
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Kisi bahaane ishq tujhse ho liya,
Tujhe chahne se dil mera ro diya,
Tujhe paane se pehle hi tujhe kho diya,
Ab dard bhara jeevan ho liya.
Very very nice Prabhaa jee, bahut daad.
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Main ek suggestion de rahaa hoon which I would call my way of writing.

Kisi bahaane ishq tujh se ho liya,
Tujhe chahne se dil mera ro diya,
Tujhe paane se bhi pehle kho kar,
Ab hai dard bhara jeevan ho liya.
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2015, 12:41:55 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2015, 03:29:54 AM »
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bahut khoob ..par aap hamesha dard pe hi kyun likhti hain..
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2015, 06:56:17 AM »
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Very very nice Prabhaa jee, bahut daad.
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Main ek suggestion de rahaa hoon which I would call my way of writing.

Kisi bahaane ishq tujh se ho liya,
Tujhe chahne se dil mera ro diya,
Tujhe paane se bhi pehle kho kar,
Ab hai dard bhara jeevan ho liya.
Thank you.
BTW, I am Pooja.Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2015, 06:57:52 AM »
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bahut khoob ..par aap hamesha dard pe hi kyun likhti hain..
Thank you.
I don't know but dard comes naturally to me!
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2015, 06:58:32 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2015, 06:56:08 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2015, 11:59:03 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause
Thank you so much.
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