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by poonamA on August 22, 2012, 05:40:49 AM
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yaar mere dil tu mera jala ke ja raha hai
hasti meri khak me mita ke ja raha hai
pyas teri mai sada bujhati rahi hu
jahar ke ghoot tu pila ke ja raha hai
dil jaan jigar vara hai maine tujh par
teer mere dil pe tu chala ke ja raha hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2012, 05:46:35 AM »
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Quote from: poonamA on August 22, 2012, 05:40:49 AM
yaar mere dil tu mera jala ke ja raha hai
hasti meri khak me mita ke ja raha hai
pyas teri mai sada bujhati rahi hu
jahar ke ghoot tu pila ke ja raha hai
dil jaan jigar vara hai maine tujh par
teer mere dil pe tu chala ke ja raha hai


naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice


                      jisney hansaayaa  taa'umr hamein.!
                      dekho kaise aaj rulaa ke ja rahaa hai.!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2012, 05:49:50 AM »
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thx.. aapki 2 lines bahot sunder
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 22, 2012, 05:46:35 AM

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice


                      jisney hansaayaa  taa'umr hamein.!
                      dekho kaise aaj rulaa ke ja rahaa hai.!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2012, 11:08:23 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahut khoob Poonam ji...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 12:40:59 PM »
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beautiful!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 04:10:22 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Poonam jee and K_A jee
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 04:20:33 PM »
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itna dard kyo
Kuch chah kar bhi na likh saka.
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2012, 04:35:28 PM »
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Quote from: poonamA on August 22, 2012, 05:40:49 AM
yaar mere dil tu mera jala ke ja raha hai
hasti meri khak me mita ke ja raha hai
pyas teri mai sada bujhati rahi hu
jahar ke ghoot tu pila ke ja raha hai
dil jaan jigar vara hai maine tujh par
teer mere dil pe tu chala ke ja raha hai

Yeh Zindagi tere saath ho,
yeh Aarzoo Din Raat Ho,
Mai Tere Sung-Sung chalon
Tu Her Safar Mere Saath Ho,
Mai Kaanto Par Bhi chal Padu,
Tere Pyaar ke Jab Barsaat Ho,
Kabhi sham Dhale Jab Hum Milen,
Na Din Dhale Na Raat Ho,
Yeh Zindagi bas Tere Saath Ho

(ab teek hai na MKV jee0
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2012, 06:05:27 PM »
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Poonam Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... bade gehre ahsaas O khayaal
bayaaN kiye hai...

In dilfareb khayaal par humari dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhati rahiye... aati rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...

khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


Suman Jee Aadaab!

WaaH jee aapka bhi jawaab nahi.. dard ke manzar ko
Khumaar e ishq meiN badal diyaa aapne... bahut khoob

Aapke bhi dili daad O mubbarakbad ...

Likhate rahiye... aati rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2012, 01:17:50 AM »
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goood
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2012, 06:58:56 AM »
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good
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«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2012, 07:07:10 AM »
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Aadaab Parwaazjee aur bahot bahot shukriya.
yoindia par aane se pahle mujhe kuch bhi likhna nahi aata tha..yaha poetry padne ke baad maine bhi thodi koshish kari..thanx to yoindia also.
Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 22, 2012, 06:05:27 PM
Poonam Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... bade gehre ahsaas O khayaal
bayaaN kiye hai...

In dilfareb khayaal par humari dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhati rahiye... aati rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...

khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


Suman Jee Aadaab!

WaaH jee aapka bhi jawaab nahi.. dard ke manzar ko
Khumaar e ishq meiN badal diyaa aapne... bahut khoob

Aapke bhi dili daad O mubbarakbad ...

Likhate rahiye... aati rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


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«Reply #12 on: August 23, 2012, 07:07:39 AM »
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hridayji thx
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 22, 2012, 11:08:23 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahut khoob Poonam ji...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 23, 2012, 07:08:36 AM »
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thx
Quote from: Sps on August 22, 2012, 12:40:59 PM
beautiful!!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 23, 2012, 07:09:14 AM »
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sumanji shukriya
Quote from: suman59 on August 22, 2012, 04:10:22 PM
bahut bahut khoob Poonam jee and K_A jee
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