Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak

by abdbundeli on May 18, 2009, 06:23:43 AM

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abdbundeli

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Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak;
Mein jaagee akulaaya!
Aaye Shyaam na kyoun bhalaa:
Koyee to batlaaya?

Path sammukh hain, pathik bhee;
Duniyaa aaye-jaaya!
Arunodaya mein, kyaa karoon,
Yadi andhiyaaraa chhaaya?

- Ram Prakash Garg ' Ramwatiya'


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madhuwesh

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Re: Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak

«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2009, 06:47:30 AM »

very very nice abd ji,bahut acha likha aapne.


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k.shael

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Re: Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak

«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2009, 06:58:08 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob, Abd Ji, Har baar kuch nayi aur behtreen lines.

Kab se niharo.n raaho ko mein radha,
Jaane kyun aab talak na mera kanha aaya.

Tarse hai mann hoke baichain bansi ki taan ko,
Bhor-bhaye panghat pe aab talak na mera kanha aaya.

Mein bawli simroo pal pal kanha kanha din rain,
Aur kanha ko to pyaar mera aab talak na bhaya.

Shally.


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak

«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2009, 09:14:02 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on May 18, 2009, 06:23:43 AM

GUD SHARING ABD


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deepika_divya

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Re: Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak

«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2009, 10:08:50 AM »

Bahoot bahoot khoob ABD ji.. bahoot khoob as Always!

Very Beautiful written Shally!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak

«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2009, 11:08:22 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 18, 2009, 06:47:30 AM

very very nice abd ji,bahut acha likha aapne.

Thanks a lot, Madhu ji!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak

«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2009, 11:20:20 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on May 18, 2009, 06:58:08 AM

Thanks a lot, Shally ji!

Wah sab kaa hai eik-saa;
Kartaa sab ko pyaar!
Aawasyak hai kintu yah,
Hon nit aankheyn chaar!!

- Ramwatiya


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abdbundeli

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Re: Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak

«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2009, 11:26:23 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 18, 2009, 09:14:02 AM

GUD SHARING ABD

Thanks a lot, khamosh_aawaaz ji! 'Ramwatiya' is my second pen-name, used in my Hindi writings! For my English writings, I use a third pen-name : G.R.Prakash.
- abd bundeli