-----/// Jaana hai tumse duur mujhe /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 27, 2012, 11:57:33 AM
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jaanaa hai tumse duur par
jaisa tum mujhe jaanti ho
jaisa tum mujhe samajhti ho
kya koi aur jaan paayega
kya koi aur mujhe samajh paayega

yun to bhoolna mushkil hoga tumhe
par tumhe main bhulaa dunga
par kya tumhaari yaadon se
duur jana mumkin ho paayega

tum hi kaho kaun hai mera
tum hi dost ho, tum hi sab kuch
kya tumse judaa hoke jee paana
mere liye mumkin ho paayega

bas kuch sawaal hain dil me
jaana tha tumhe humse duur
to aaye hi kyun the itne paas
ab tumhaari nazdikiyon ko bhulaana
kya inti asaani se ho paayega
is dil ko ab tumhaari aadaat si hai
is aadat ko chhod paana ab
kya mumkin ho paayega

chale jaaoge tum mujhse duur
ehsaas hai mujhe is baat ka
par sach ye bhi hai ki
tumhaare chale jaane ke baad
zinda to rahunga main par
jeenaa aasaan na ho paayega
reh jaayegi kuch yaadein dil me
aur kankaalon ka dher reh jaayega....


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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2012, 12:34:28 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2012, 12:45:00 PM »
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Brother aapki es kalam se to dard tapak tapak ke gir raha h.
Jis tarah aapne apne khayalo ko lafjo me dhalke pesh kiya h uski jitni tareef ki jaaye kam h...
Aaki es composition ke liye ham hazar baar daad dete h.
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2012, 03:08:50 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob hriday jiii...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2012, 05:40:13 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2012, 07:46:12 PM »
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GOOD LINES  HRIDAY JI...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

KISKI HOnGI WO NIGAAHEN
TO TUJHE DEKHNE KO TARSATI HO
KISKI HONGI WO BAAHEN
JO TUJHE KASNE KO TARSATI HO..

KISKE HONGE WO HONTH
JO TERE NAAM SE SAJTE HO
KAHA HONGE WO HAATH
JO TERI DUA KO UTHTE HO

KAHAAN PAAOGI YE MUJHE KHO KAR
KYA JI PAAOGI TUM JUDA HOKAR...    (LINES FROM MY PRIVOUS POETRY)

AAPKE KHAYAL PADHKAR YAAD AA GAYI,,
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2012, 04:48:25 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2012, 06:11:22 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2012, 01:52:39 PM »
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thank you sooooooooooooo much bhaai....!!! bahut bahut shukriyaa apkaa...!!!

Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 27, 2012, 12:45:00 PM
Brother aapki es kalam se to dard tapak tapak ke gir raha h.
Jis tarah aapne apne khayalo ko lafjo me dhalke pesh kiya h uski jitni tareef ki jaaye kam h...
Aaki es composition ke liye ham hazar baar daad dete h.
Plz kabool farmaye
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2012, 04:38:08 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Dolly ji....!!!

Quote from: dolly on April 27, 2012, 03:08:50 PM
bahut bahut khoob hriday jiii...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2012, 01:55:25 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Shihab ji....!!!

Quote from: Shihab on April 27, 2012, 05:27:40 PM
Bahut Khub Hriday Ji

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

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bahut bahut shukriyaa Hasan ji....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: May 08, 2012, 07:13:37 PM »
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Thank you sooooooooo much I_W ji...!!!

aapne bhi bahut bahut khoob likha hai....!!!

Quote from: injured.warrior on April 27, 2012, 07:46:12 PM
GOOD LINES  HRIDAY JI...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

KISKI HOnGI WO NIGAAHEN
TO TUJHE DEKHNE KO TARSATI HO
KISKI HONGI WO BAAHEN
JO TUJHE KASNE KO TARSATI HO..

KISKE HONGE WO HONTH
JO TERE NAAM SE SAJTE HO
KAHA HONGE WO HAATH
JO TERI DUA KO UTHTE HO

KAHAAN PAAOGI YE MUJHE KHO KAR
KYA JI PAAOGI TUM JUDA HOKAR...    (LINES FROM MY PRIVOUS POETRY)

AAPKE KHAYAL PADHKAR YAAD AA GAYI,,
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«Reply #13 on: May 08, 2012, 07:14:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mittal ji....!!!

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