Jaane Kitni Ghadiyan Intezar Men Guzar Gayi Hain

by majid on July 15, 2010, 12:16:46 AM
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2010, 12:40:49 AM »
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Apka title aur akhri line 'jane kitni ghadiyan intezar main guzar gayi hai' bahaut khubsoorat line hai yeh..bahaut acha laga yeh parr kar...jaise dil ka khalipan apne dhoor kar diya...bahaut khoob. Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2010, 01:13:17 AM »
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Shihab Ji.....aapki tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe...nice creation...dil se daad !
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2010, 04:44:08 AM »
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    Waah Shihab ji ise padhkar to gungunane ka man karne laga bilkul par hume deshwasio ki sehat ki fiqr hai to gaane ka idea to drop kar diya humne,padhkar hi kaam chala rahe hai. Sahi me Bahut aasan se lafzo me pyaar bhari peshkash lagi ye mujhe. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2010, 05:16:35 AM »
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wahh wahhh shihaab ji kya khub kaha hai......
dil ki baaton ko sidhe simple tarike se keh diya ...

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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2010, 08:49:50 AM »
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Maar hi daaloge... ye andaaz-e-bayaan.... kya kahein sahab... ufffff... dil ko cheerte huye nikal gayi.... !!! Ek naya andaz , ek nayi nazm, aur hamare liye ek aur nayi sikh... Shihab ji manna padega aapko... kisi bhi andaaz me likhen aap... bas kamaal hi likhte hain... lajawaab... hamare paas shabd nahi hain sarkaar taarif ke liye... bahut hi umda likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2010, 08:58:36 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2010, 10:33:12 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Majid Bhai..

Vaakai Isse Ek Geet Ki tarah Gunguna Sakte hai..

Bahut Hi Pyaare Jazbaat!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2010, 11:23:54 AM »
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Bahot khoob Shihab Bhai.Bahot khoobsurat creation hai aapki. Allah aapko khush rakeh.
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«Reply #9 on: July 21, 2010, 09:59:45 AM »
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Wah Wah Meri Jaan Kya Khoob Likha Hai Yaar
Sach Mein Bohat Hi Maza Aaya Padke.
Bohat Hi Khoob Mere Bhai...

Allah pak tumhe Khush Rakhe. Ameen
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«Reply #10 on: July 21, 2010, 08:48:14 PM »
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Uffffffffffff Sihab ji aapke ye khoobsurat kavita asar kar gayi mere dil pe.mindblowing creation.bahut khoob.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2010, 10:27:24 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukariya Meri Jaan Himaat Afzaii Ke Liye.
ALLAH Pak Tujhey Mast, Wyast Aur, Chust Rakhe Ameen.


~Shihab~


Welcome N Shukariya Duao,n ke Liye
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«Reply #12 on: August 05, 2010, 11:01:36 AM »
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wah shihab sahab wah...kehr dha diya apne..

ye manzar ye fiza ye bahar tere liye he,
ye mehekta mohabbat ka alam ye bayaar tere liye he~
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