jaatey jaatey hum pey woh ehsaan ker gaya

by Fouad on August 16, 2007, 08:15:32 AM
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jaatey jaatey hum pey woh ehsaan ker gaya
mukammal barbaadiyoun ka samaan ker gaya

ekk girtey hoye ko jab sambhala us ney
khuqat-e-sheher ko woh hairaan ker gaya

ek bhoola taara suraj ko sawerey sawerey
humaari raat ki haalat bayaan ker gaya

un aankhoun ko ilzaam hargiz na dou
baas dekhnaa un ka pareshaan ker gaya

ekk dil apney ko woh samjhaa na seka
main jis per jaan apni qurbaan ker gaya

tarasati nighaoun sey jab dekha falak ko
merey hissey ka deedaar aasmaan ker gaya

us ney silsila tou rekha guftugu ka fouad
meri muhskil woh kuch tou asaan ker gaya

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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2007, 07:02:42 PM »
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khugat-e-sheher = ?

boht acha likha Usual Smile

:D :D :D
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2007, 07:29:50 PM »
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nice keep it up xx Winking
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2007, 08:23:19 PM »
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khuqat-e-sheher ka matlab hai sheher ke log.

Khuqat ka matlab hai abaadi.
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2007, 10:44:34 PM »
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Fouad

Very nice poem !

Bahut acha laga padh kar !
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2007, 11:04:19 AM »
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bahut ache Fouad ji

bahut hi khubsurat hai. . .isi trah likhte rahiye
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