~*~*~Jab Dard Utha In Aankho me~*~*~

by pankshivam on February 14, 2009, 09:55:32 PM
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Jab dard utha in aankho me
Jab koi na mila mujhe lakho me...

Dil ne di aawaz use...
Chaha dil ne shiddat se jise...

Kuch Paya bhi nahi khoya bhi nahi...
Judayi ka pal tha jane kaisa, muskuraya bhi nahi roya bhi nahi...

Din raat ye dil ab rota hai ...
Ashko ke samandar khota hai...
Ye taqleef na de aye khuda use...
Ke dard ka aalam kya hota hai...

Aayega jami pe jab khuda mera...
Payega in sanso pe jab naam tera...

Kismat dekhkar meri, vo sabr ka aalam khoyega...
Hasunga uske askhko pe jab fut fut vo royega...

.............................
~Pank~
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2009, 11:14:01 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot khoob Pank ji
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2009, 11:19:27 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 14, 2009, 11:14:01 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot khoob Pank ji
Shukriya Poojaji
Aap bhi kuch likh deti toh achha hota
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2009, 11:30:17 PM »
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Bahut sundar peshkash hai Shivam Ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2009, 11:36:06 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 14, 2009, 11:30:17 PM
Bahut sundar peshkash hai Shivam Ji
Shukriya Rajeshji
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2009, 07:15:22 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 14, 2009, 09:55:32 PM
Jab dard utha in aankho me
Jab koi na mila mujhe lakho me...

Dil ne di aawaz use...
Chaha dil ne shiddat se jise...

Kuch Paya bhi nahi khoya bhi nahi...
Judayi ka pal tha jane kaisa, muskuraya bhi nahi roya bhi nahi...

Din raat ye dil ab rota hai hai...
Ashko ke samandar khota hai...
Ye taqleef na de aye khuda use...
Ke dard ka aalam kya hota hai...

Aayega jami pe jab khuda mera...
Payega in sanso pe jab naam tera...

Kismat dekhkar meri, vo sabr ka aalam khoyega...
Hasunga uske askhko pe jab fut fut vo royega...

.............................
~Pank~


kamal ka likha hai Pank jee as usual... Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2009, 08:07:39 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 15, 2009, 07:15:22 AM
kamal ka likha hai Pank jee as usual... Applause Applause
Shukriya Rahim Bhai
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2009, 09:57:35 AM »
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ur welcome Pank jee
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2009, 10:29:57 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 14, 2009, 09:55:32 PM
Jab dard utha in aankho me
Jab koi na mila mujhe lakho me...

Dil ne di aawaz use...
Chaha dil ne shiddat se jise...

Kuch Paya bhi nahi khoya bhi nahi...
Judayi ka pal tha jane kaisa, muskuraya bhi nahi roya bhi nahi...

Din raat ye dil ab rota hai hai...
Ashko ke samandar khota hai...
Ye taqleef na de aye khuda use...
Ke dard ka aalam kya hota hai...

Aayega jami pe jab khuda mera...
Payega in sanso pe jab naam tera...

Kismat dekhkar meri, vo sabr ka aalam khoyega...
Hasunga uske askhko pe jab fut fut vo royega...

.............................
~Pank~


Very nice pank ji Applause Applause

Jis dard se hum hai guzre,
Us dozak ko unka kabhi didar na ho,
Jaise karte hai unka intezaar hum,
Be-wafa yaar pe kisko waisa aitbaar na ho!

Khudaai bhi ro padegi is dard se,
Phir bhi bewafa-dil nahi pighla,
Hum karte bhi kaise gila mehfil me,
K ab bhi hamara dam nahi nikla!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2009, 02:04:59 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Panks, bohot achcha likha hai aapne Applause

Salma, you also wrote a nice one...Keep writing
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«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2009, 02:20:32 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 14, 2009, 09:55:32 PM
Jab dard utha in aankho me
Jab koi na mila mujhe lakho me...

Dil ne di aawaz use...
Chaha dil ne shiddat se jise...

Kuch Paya bhi nahi khoya bhi nahi...
Judayi ka pal tha jane kaisa, muskuraya bhi nahi roya bhi nahi...

Din raat ye dil ab rota hai hai...
Ashko ke samandar khota hai...
Ye taqleef na de aye khuda use...
Ke dard ka aalam kya hota hai...

Aayega jami pe jab khuda mera...
Payega in sanso pe jab naam tera...

Kismat dekhkar meri, vo sabr ka aalam khoyega...
Hasunga uske askhko pe jab fut fut vo royega...

.............................
~Pank~


wah pank, bahut khoob

jasbir singh
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«Reply #11 on: February 19, 2009, 02:44:21 PM »
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Thanks Talat sis... Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #12 on: February 22, 2009, 08:09:59 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Wonderful Creation Pank ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 22, 2009, 08:19:05 AM »
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Thanx Celmiraji
Shukiya Rojaji
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«Reply #14 on: February 22, 2009, 08:20:10 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 19, 2009, 10:29:57 AM
Very nice pank ji Applause Applause

Jis dard se hum hai guzre,
Us dozak ko unka kabhi didar na ho,
Jaise karte hai unka intezaar hum,
Be-wafa yaar pe kisko waisa aitbaar na ho!

Khudaai bhi ro padegi is dard se,
Phir bhi bewafa-dil nahi pighla,
Hum karte bhi kaise gila mehfil me,
K ab bhi hamara dam nahi nikla!!




Shukriya Salmaji
Bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne
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