~*~*~Jab Dard Utha In Aankho me~*~*~

by pankshivam on February 14, 2009, 09:55:32 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 22, 2009, 08:47:26 AM »
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Very nice pank ji Applause Applause

Jis dard se hum hai guzre,
Us dozak ko unka kabhi didar na ho,
Jaise karte hai unka intezaar hum,
Be-wafa yaar pe kisko waisa aitbaar na ho!

Khudaai bhi ro padegi is dard se,
Phir bhi bewafa-dil nahi pighla,
Hum karte bhi kaise gila mehfil me,
K ab bhi hamara dam nahi nikla!!

Bahut accha likha hai aapne salma ji
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«Reply #16 on: February 22, 2009, 09:53:09 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pankji..Bahut Hi Khoobsurati se aapne yeh Nazm Likhi hai.. Applause Applause Applause.
Bahut Bhaut ache Salma..Apane Bhi Bahut acha likha ahi Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: February 22, 2009, 10:02:04 AM »
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«Reply #18 on: March 09, 2009, 04:38:50 AM »
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Shukriya Pank ji, Roja sis n Khwaish ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: March 09, 2009, 05:22:55 AM »
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Shukriya Pank ji, Roja sis n Khwaish ji Usual Smile
UR WELCOME SALMAJI
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«Reply #20 on: March 09, 2009, 05:56:14 AM »
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Jab dard utha in aankho me
Jab koi na mila mujhe lakho me...

Dil ne di aawaz use...
Chaha dil ne shiddat se jise...

Kuch Paya bhi nahi khoya bhi nahi...
Judayi ka pal tha jane kaisa, muskuraya bhi nahi roya bhi nahi...

Din raat ye dil ab rota hai hai...
Ashko ke samandar khota hai...
Ye taqleef na de aye khuda use...
Ke dard ka aalam kya hota hai...

Aayega jami pe jab khuda mera...
Payega in sanso pe jab naam tera...

Kismat dekhkar meri, vo sabr ka aalam khoyega...
Hasunga uske askhko pe jab fut fut vo royega...

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~Pank~


Bahut hii Khoobsurat dard bhari peshkash, Pank Ji, hamesha ki tarah  Applause

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«Reply #21 on: March 09, 2009, 06:04:26 AM »
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Bahut hii Khoobsurat dard bhari peshkash, Pank Ji, hamesha ki tarah  Applause


Shukriya Deepatiji
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«Reply #22 on: July 13, 2009, 07:58:16 PM »
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Shukriya Poojaji
Aap bhi kuch likh deti toh achha hota

Maafi chahti hu Pank ji itne dino baad jawab likhne ke liye...

Jab dard in ankho main simat atta hai
Her dhundhla aks bhi saaf najar atta hai

Dil ki awaz rah jaati hai kahin dil main
Na chahte bhi dil bilkh jaata hai

Pane ke ehsaas per khone ka ehsaas
Toote dil mai phir se kuch toota san ajar atta hai

Kaya wajah hai kis baat per aa gaye ansoo
Ab to dil yah bhi kaha samjh paata hai

Jab dard in ankho main simat atta hai
Her dhundhla aks bhi saaf najar atta hai!!
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