~*~Jab Mujhse Juda Hoga~*~................

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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2009, 09:52:46 PM »
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Every lines are very nice.Last one is the best. Applause Applause Applause
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob Pank, bahoot acha likha hai!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2009, 03:37:21 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai Pank ji  Applause
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Shukriya Sapnaji,Poojaji,Rojaji
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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2009, 04:46:51 AM »
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Bahut khoob, bahtreen alfaaz ke sath, Pankshivam...
Pasand aaya, wah...
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Quote from: syednaami on May 03, 2009, 04:46:51 AM
Bahut khoob, bahtreen alfaaz ke sath, Pankshivam...
Pasand aaya, wah...
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«Reply #7 on: May 03, 2009, 05:05:50 AM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai Pank...


Tu kya hoga aur main kya houngi jab tu mujhse juda hoga,
bhatak na jaaye zindagi jab teri yaadon ka qaarvan rukhsat hoga...
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2009, 05:09:52 AM »
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Bohat khoob shivam ji,,, Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2009, 05:15:35 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 03, 2009, 05:05:50 AM
Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai Pank...


Tu kya hoga aur main kya houngi jab tu mujhse juda hoga,
bhatak na jaaye zindagi jab teri yaadon ka qaarvan rukhsat hoga...
Shukriya Angelji

Yaadon ke nishan kuch yun reh jayenge sahil pe...
De jaunga ask fir se, jab dard dba hoga....
~Pank~
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Bohat khoob shivam ji,,, Applause Applause
Shukriya Jaya ji
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Bahut bahut bahut achhe pank ji Applause Applause Applause
Behatareen alfaaz aur behad khubsurat nazm..bahut pasand aaya Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hai, Pank Ji! Bahut khoob! Applause
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Ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hai, Pank Ji! Bahut khoob! Applause
Shukriya Deepati ji
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