~*~Jab Mujhse Juda Hoga~*~................

by pankshivam on May 02, 2009, 09:24:15 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 03, 2009, 06:36:56 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on May 03, 2009, 05:15:35 AM
Shukriya Angelji

Yaadon ke nishan kuch yun reh jayenge sahil pe...
De jaunga ask fir se, jab dard dba hoga....
~Pank~


kya hoga haasil kinaare pe khade hoke ashq bahane se,
ke samundar ki har leher laakhon ashqon se bhari hui hai...
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«Reply #16 on: May 03, 2009, 06:56:22 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 03, 2009, 06:36:56 AM

kya hoga haasil kinaare pe khade hoke ashq bahane se,
ke samundar ki har leher laakhon ashqon se bhari hui hai...

Hasil nahi kuch bhi, ye meri saza hai...
Vo bhi to tadpta hoga, jisne mera intezar kiya hai...
~Pank~
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«Reply #17 on: May 03, 2009, 07:16:06 AM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Pank Bhai,.

Har Line Mashallah Dil Ke Feelings Ko Cherd Rahi Hai,. Good Job,.
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«Reply #18 on: May 03, 2009, 07:25:04 AM »
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Bohat khoob Shivam jitna tumhe padha hain, no doubt this is my favorite so far. Yeh tay kar pana mushkil ho gaya hain ke kaunsa sher mujhe ziyada pasand hain.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lagta hain woh pareshaa.N, bhati nahi mohabbat

Meri tarah woh bhi, us bevafa se mila hoga....

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«Reply #19 on: May 03, 2009, 07:39:21 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Shukriya Azeem Bhai
Thanks Sajid Sir Bahoot Achha Laga ke Aapne Mere Liye Kuch Kaaha
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«Reply #20 on: May 03, 2009, 07:54:47 AM »
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Ek Koshish Ki Hai,.

Ujaala Yun Andheron Mein Kabhi Hota Nahi "Azeem,.
Shayad Meri Taraah Kisi Aur Ka Dil Bhi Jalaa Hoga,.

Dekhkar Use Lagta Hai Ke Wo Mukammal Hua "Azeem,.
Ab Jaakar Kahin Wo Apni Zindagi Se Milaa Hoga,.

Yun Ruke Hue Maine Kabhi Dekha Nahi Tujhe,.
Wo Aayega Humraahi Banne, Kahin Aisa Usne Kahaa Hoga,.

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«Reply #21 on: May 03, 2009, 08:23:49 AM »
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Very Nice Azeem Bhai
Aapki Koshish Bhi Kamal ki Hoti Hai
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: May 03, 2009, 08:27:36 AM »
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Very Nice Azeem Bhai
Aapki Koshish Bhi Kamal ki Hoti Hai
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Shukriya Bhai,.
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«Reply #23 on: May 03, 2009, 08:29:06 AM »
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Jab bhi mein chand ko dekhti hoon
Sochti hoon tum bhi dekhte honge

Jab bhi mein aaine mein tumari tasveer dekhti hoon
Sochti hoon tum bhi meri tasveer dekhte honge

Waqt ke saath saath kahin tum bhi badal na jaana
Agar bhari mehfill mein hum tanha ho, aap humen yaad karte honge

 
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«Reply #24 on: May 03, 2009, 08:32:54 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 03, 2009, 08:29:06 AM
Jab bhi mein chand ko dekhti hoon
Sochti hoon tum bhi dekhte honge

Jab bhi mein aaine mein tumari tasveer dekhti hoon
Sochti hoon tum bhi meri tasveer dekhte honge

Waqt ke saath saath kahin tum bhi badal na jaana
Agar bhari mehfill mein hum tanha ho, aap humen yaad karte honge

Waah Didi, KIya Khoob Likha Hai,.
Nice Job,.
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«Reply #25 on: May 03, 2009, 08:39:21 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on May 03, 2009, 08:32:54 AM
Waah Didi, KIya Khoob Likha Hai,.
Nice Job,.

Thanks Bhai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: May 03, 2009, 08:47:34 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 03, 2009, 08:29:06 AM
Jab bhi mein chand ko dekhti hoon
Sochti hoon tum bhi dekhte honge

Jab bhi mein aaine mein tumari tasveer dekhti hoon
Sochti hoon tum bhi meri tasveer dekhte honge

Waqt ke saath saath kahin tum bhi badal na jaana
Agar bhari mehfill mein hum tanha ho, aap humen yaad karte honge

 

Very Nice Jaya ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #27 on: May 03, 2009, 08:50:01 AM »
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Very Nice Jaya ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Shivam ...
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«Reply #28 on: May 03, 2009, 08:57:45 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 03, 2009, 08:50:01 AM
Shukriya Shivam ...
Welcome Jayaji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #29 on: May 03, 2009, 09:07:16 AM »
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Doori se nahi judaii se darte hai
Hum unke nigahoon mein roz marte hain
Kabhi toh jaane woh meri dil ki baat
Isliye hum unhe kahene se darte hain
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