~*~Jab Mujhse Juda Hoga~*~................

by pankshivam on May 02, 2009, 09:24:15 PM
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«Reply #30 on: May 03, 2009, 09:18:28 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 03, 2009, 09:07:16 AM
Doori se nahi judaii se darte hai
Hum unke nigahoon mein roz marte hain
Kabhi toh jaane woh meri dil ki baat
Isliye hum unhe kahene se darte hain
Bahoot Khoob Jaya ji
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«Reply #31 on: May 03, 2009, 12:18:38 PM »
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bahut achche pank bhai......
bahut hi khoobsurati se likha hai tune ...............
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pankshivam
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«Reply #32 on: May 03, 2009, 12:24:28 PM »
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Thanks Salil Bhai
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salma786
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«Reply #33 on: May 04, 2009, 06:24:03 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on May 02, 2009, 09:24:15 PM


Bahoot bahoot khoob Pank ji Applause Applause Applause


Sadayen dhadkan ki yun hi chalti rahegi,
Tere jane se meri zindegi bhi dhalti rahegi,

Do pal jo sath guzare hai humne,
Sari kaynaat un lamho ko yaad karti rahegi,

Akhon me teri tasveer na hogi,
Mere jism se teri khusboo mehakti rahegi,

Jitna ashq bahega mera teri judaai me,
Teri rooh bhi judaai me tadapti rahegi,

Bichad ke tujhse mai bikhar jau to gam nahi,
Falak me nishaani hamari chamakti rahegi!
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«Reply #34 on: May 04, 2009, 06:32:47 AM »
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Huzena sis,Jaya sis,Azeem ji,sajid ji... sabne bahoot acha likha hai Thumbs UP
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«Reply #35 on: May 04, 2009, 08:34:56 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on May 02, 2009, 09:24:15 PM

Waah ...Bohot hi Khoob Panks Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #36 on: May 04, 2009, 09:39:00 PM »
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kya baat hai dost !! bahut acha hai
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pankshivam
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«Reply #37 on: May 05, 2009, 07:40:21 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on May 04, 2009, 06:24:03 AM

Bahoot bahoot khoob Pank ji Applause Applause Applause


Sadayen dhadkan ki yun hi chalti rahegi,
Tere jane se meri zindegi bhi dhalti rahegi,

Do pal jo sath guzare hai humne,
Sari kaynaat un lamho ko yaad karti rahegi,

Akhon me teri tasveer na hogi,
Mere jism se teri khusboo mehakti rahegi,

Jitna ashq bahega mera teri judaai me,
Teri rooh bhi judaai me tadapti rahegi,

Bichad ke tujhse mai bikhar jau to gam nahi,
Falak me nishaani hamari chamakti rahegi!

Awesome Salmaji
 Applause Applause Applause

aapne jo likha uske aage ye kuch bhi nahi bs reply dene ki koshish hai
shurkiya salma ji sach me dard ko maine mehsus kiya jo aapne apne reply me shhiddat se piroya hai...

Jitna dard nazar aaya hai aaj teri baaton me...
Na paya itna kabhi apni tanha raaton me...

Teri judaayi se aaj mujhe dard ho raha hai...
Kyun itna pyaar tha un hasi mulakaton me...
~Pank~
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«Reply #38 on: May 05, 2009, 07:41:14 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 04, 2009, 08:34:56 PM
Waah ...Bohot hi Khoob Panks Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Celmiraji
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«Reply #39 on: May 05, 2009, 07:41:52 AM »
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Quote from: Nadaan Alone on May 04, 2009, 09:39:00 PM
kya baat hai dost !! bahut acha hai
Thanks Naadan Ji
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«Reply #40 on: May 05, 2009, 08:38:51 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on May 05, 2009, 07:40:21 AM
Awesome Salmaji
 Applause Applause Applause

aapne jo likha uske aage ye kuch bhi nahi bs reply dene ki koshish hai
shurkiya salma ji sach me dard ko maine mehsus kiya jo aapne apne reply me shhiddat se piroya hai...

Jitna dard nazar aaya hai aaj teri baaton me...
Na paya itna kabhi apni tanha raaton me...

Teri judaayi se aaj mujhe dard ho raha hai...
Kyun itna pyaar tha un hasi mulakaton me...
~Pank~

Shukriya Usual Smile

Aap to bahoot acha likhte hai janab Applause Applause

Dard itna hai ye kaise bataye tumhe,
Tanhaa kitni ratein humne bitayi hai,
Aksar ye gumaan hota hai tanhaiyon me,
Shayad tum ne hi mohabbat ki duniya banayi hai!
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«Reply #41 on: May 05, 2009, 09:06:28 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on May 05, 2009, 08:38:51 AM
Shukriya Usual Smile

Aap to bahoot acha likhte hai janab Applause Applause

Dard itna hai ye kaise bataye tumhe,
Tanhaa kitni ratein humne bitayi hai,
Aksar ye gumaan hota hai tanhaiyon me,
Shayad tum ne hi mohabbat ki duniya banayi hai!
Shukriya
Bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne

Dard ki dastan kuch is tarah sunate rahe...
Hame dekh vo apne ashk dil me chipate rahe...

Na kar paye ham wafayen unse shayad kabhi...
Meri sadayen na milne pe vo chupchap dur jate rahe...
~Pank~
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«Reply #42 on: May 05, 2009, 11:05:32 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on May 05, 2009, 09:06:28 AM
Shukriya
Bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne

Dard ki dastan kuch is tarah sunate rahe...
Hame dekh vo apne ashk dil me chipate rahe...

Na kar paye ham wafayen unse shayad kabhi...
Meri sadayen na milne pe vo chupchap dur jate rahe...
~Pank~

Wafaaon ki umid hi nahi hai hume,
Bas dil me choti si jagah banaye rakhna,
Jo mana tha kabhi dil se apna hume,
To dil me hume ta-umr basaye rakhna!
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«Reply #43 on: May 05, 2009, 11:07:17 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Pank Ji, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.
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«Reply #44 on: May 05, 2009, 06:47:56 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob salma and pank ji!!!
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