JAB SE KOI JUDAA HO GYA [Asghr]

by Asghr on February 15, 2009, 08:05:55 PM
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JAB SE KOI MUJH SE JUDAA HO GYA HAI
MERE DIL KA SHAER FANA HO GYA HAI
UHS SE BICHER KAR YOUN LAGTA HAI
JAISE YEH JEEVN SAZA HO GYA HAI
YEH KAISA KISMAT KA KHEL HAI JANAA
SOCHA THA KYA AUR KYA HO GYA HAI
AB TUM SE MILNA MUMKIN NAHIN HAI
YEH NA SOCHNA SANAM BEHWAFA HO GYA HAI
EH BAAD-E-SABA MERE YAR SE ITNA KEHNA
TERE BIN ASGHR TANHAA HO GYA HAI
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2009, 10:21:03 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Asghr Ji, bohot khoobsurat likha hai aapne  Applause

Ek choti si koshish humari:

Naseeba kyun mera bigad gaya,
Mera pyar mujhse bichad gaya

Badi hasraton se banaya jise,
Wo mahal khwaabon ka bikhar gaya

Khizaaon ka pehra laga is tarah
Chahaton ka gulshan ujad gaya

Zindagi apni raah chalti rahi,
Dil bas ek muqaam pe thahar gaya !
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2009, 12:40:35 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 15, 2009, 10:21:03 PM
Bohot Khoob Asghr Ji, bohot khoobsurat likha hai aapne  Applause

Ek choti si koshish humari:

Naseeba kyun mera bigad gaya,
Mera pyar mujhse bichad gaya

Badi hasraton se banaya jise,
Wo mahal khwaabon ka bikhar gaya

Khizaaon ka pehra laga is tarah
Chahaton ka gulshan ujad gaya

Zindagi apni raah chalti rahi,
Dil bas ek muqaam pe thahar gaya !
CELMIRA JI SACH KAHON AAP KI TEHREER K SAMNE MERI GAZAL PHIKEE LAGTI HAI,SDAA ISSI TARAH LIKHTI REHAIN MAIN AAP LAUGOOHN SE  SEEKH RAH HOOHN.ASGHR
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2009, 12:46:32 AM »
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HOSLA AFZAI KA SHUKRIYA SDAA MUSKRATI REHAIN.ASGHR
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2009, 02:00:32 AM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 15, 2009, 08:05:55 PM
JAB SE KOI MUJH SE JUDAA HO GYA HAI
MERE DIL KA SHAER FANA HO GYA HAI
UHS SE BICHER KAR YOUN LAGTA HAI
JAISE YEH JEEVN SAZA HO GYA HAI
YEH KAISA KISMAT KA KHEL HAI JANAA
SOCHA THA KYA AUR KYA HO GYA HAI
AB TUM SE MILNA MUMKIN NAHIN HAI
YEH NA SOCHNA SANAM BEHWAFA HO GYA HAI
EH BAAD-E-SABA MERE YAR SE ITNA KEHNA
TERE BIN ASGHR TANHAA HO GYA HAI

Wah wah asghr ji..  Applause Applause
Bahut khoob... bahut accha laga padkar. keep up  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2009, 02:02:05 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 15, 2009, 10:21:03 PM
Bohot Khoob Asghr Ji, bohot khoobsurat likha hai aapne  Applause

Ek choti si koshish humari:

Naseeba kyun mera bigad gaya,
Mera pyar mujhse bichad gaya

Badi hasraton se banaya jise,
Wo mahal khwaabon ka bikhar gaya

Khizaaon ka pehra laga is tarah
Chahaton ka gulshan ujad gaya

Zindagi apni raah chalti rahi,
Dil bas ek muqaam pe thahar gaya !

aww aap ki yeh choti si koshish hame bahut accha lada celmira ...  Applause
Good work  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2009, 06:20:51 AM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 15, 2009, 08:05:55 PM
JAB SE KOI MUJH SE JUDAA HO GYA HAI
MERE DIL KA SHAER FANA HO GYA HAI
UHS SE BICHER KAR YOUN LAGTA HAI
JAISE YEH JEEVN SAZA HO GYA HAI
YEH KAISA KISMAT KA KHEL HAI JANAA
SOCHA THA KYA AUR KYA HO GYA HAI
AB TUM SE MILNA MUMKIN NAHIN HAI
YEH NA SOCHNA SANAM BEHWAFA HO GYA HAI
EH BAAD-E-SABA MERE YAR SE ITNA KEHNA
TERE BIN ASGHR TANHAA HO GYA HAI

Asghr ji bohat khoobsurat se likha hai aapne ... Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2009, 06:21:56 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 15, 2009, 10:21:03 PM
Bohot Khoob Asghr Ji, bohot khoobsurat likha hai aapne  Applause

Ek choti si koshish humari:

Naseeba kyun mera bigad gaya,
Mera pyar mujhse bichad gaya

Badi hasraton se banaya jise,
Wo mahal khwaabon ka bikhar gaya

Khizaaon ka pehra laga is tarah
Chahaton ka gulshan ujad gaya

Zindagi apni raah chalti rahi,
Dil bas ek muqaam pe thahar gaya !


Very beautifull lines Celmira sis... Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2009, 07:32:36 AM »
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Subhan Allah, Suhan Allah,.
Bohat Bohat Achchi Hai Bhai, Mujhe Behad Pasand Aai,,.
Yunhui Likhaa Karein Aur Hume Seekhne Ka Maukha Dein,.
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2009, 01:30:56 PM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 16, 2009, 12:40:35 AM
CELMIRA JI SACH KAHON AAP KI TEHREER K SAMNE MERI GAZAL PHIKEE LAGTI HAI,SDAA ISSI TARAH LIKHTI REHAIN MAIN AAP LAUGOOHN SE  SEEKH RAH HOOHN.ASGHR

Shukriya Asghr Ji...Aap ke is anaadz-e-bayaan pe hum sharminda ho gaye....Aap bohot khoobsurat likhte hain !!



Quote from: Asghr on February 16, 2009, 12:46:32 AM
HOSLA AFZAI KA SHUKRIYA SDAA MUSKRATI REHAIN.ASGHR

Shukriya khoobsurat dua ka Asghr Ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2009, 01:31:28 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 16, 2009, 02:00:32 AM
Wah wah asghr ji..  Applause Applause
Bahut khoob... bahut accha laga padkar. keep up  Thumbs UP
THANKS ROJA JI.ASGHR
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«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2009, 01:31:47 PM »
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Thanks a lot Roja, Honey for appreciation Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2009, 01:32:56 PM »
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JAANASHEEN BHAI SDAA KHUSH REHAIN.ASGHR
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«Reply #13 on: February 16, 2009, 01:37:48 PM »
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Asghr ji bohat khoobsurat se likha hai aapne ... Applause
SHUKRIYA!SDAA KHUSH REHAIN.ASGHR
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«Reply #14 on: February 16, 2009, 01:38:40 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 15, 2009, 10:21:03 PM
Bohot Khoob Asghr Ji, bohot khoobsurat likha hai aapne  Applause

Ek choti si koshish humari:

Naseeba kyun mera bigad gaya,
Mera pyar mujhse bichad gaya

Badi hasraton se banaya jise,
Wo mahal khwaabon ka bikhar gaya

Khizaaon ka pehra laga is tarah
Chahaton ka gulshan ujad gaya

Zindagi apni raah chalti rahi,
Dil bas ek muqaam pe thahar gaya !

Nice One Talat Sis, Har Baar Ki Tarah.,
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