<>*Jabse tumne mujhse duuri bana li*<>

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<>*Jabse tumne mujhse duuri bana li*<>


Jabse tumne mujhse duuri bana li
Mere hothon se jaise har nazm chura li

Khamoshi si chhai hui hai har taraf
Sangeet ne kahin aur apni mehfil saja li

Tamannaon ne yun dum tod diya dil me
Khwaishon ne jaise apni surat jala li

Kaise kahun k kya hota ja raha hai mujhe
Apne hi hathon maine apni pehchaan mita li…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2010, 08:25:03 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai kasak ji..bahut dard bhara hai apki nazm main sab khairiyat se tou hai naa??
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«Reply #2 on: November 23, 2010, 08:30:41 AM »
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haan yar...aisa laga jaise Kisi khas ka fon aya tha or baat khatam hone ke baad Kasak ji ne likha hai..
Lekin Mashaallah kya khub likha wah wah..!!!
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2010, 08:45:12 AM »
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nahin kb ji aisa kuch nahin hua hai...balki iska ulta hua hai...phn nahin aaya isly likha hai ye... tongue3
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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2010, 10:35:14 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2010, 10:44:52 AM »
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kisi ke paas aake duur jaana asaan nahi,
kisi ko chaah ke bhulaana asaan nahi,

socha tha bhool jaayenge tumhe bahut jald,
par jo saanson me ho use mitaana asaan nahi....
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«Reply #6 on: November 23, 2010, 11:16:07 AM »
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hmm   bahut touchyh lagi...

bahut khoob anu ji..

khushi hoti he jab aap kisi ko kuchh shabd do or wo poori gazal bana de..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #7 on: November 23, 2010, 01:02:37 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on November 23, 2010, 08:18:24 AM
<>*Jabse tumne mujhse duuri bana li*<>


Jabse tumne mujhse duuri bana li
Mere hothon se jaise har nazm chura li

Khamoshi si chhai hui hai har taraf
Sangeet ne kahin aur apni mehfil saja li

Tamannaon ne yun dum tod diya dil me
Khwaishon ne jaise apni surat jala li

Kaise kahun k kya hota ja raha hai mujhe
Apne hi hathon maine apni pehchaan mita li…!!!


Bahut Bahut Khoob Anuji..

Dil Ko Chutti Hui Peshkash!!!

Bahut Ache  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: November 23, 2010, 01:21:52 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on November 23, 2010, 08:18:24 AM
<>*Jabse tumne mujhse duuri bana li*<>


Jabse tumne mujhse duuri bana li
Mere hothon se jaise har nazm chura li

Khamoshi si chhai hui hai har taraf
Sangeet ne kahin aur apni mehfil saja li

Tamannaon ne yun dum tod diya dil me
Khwaishon ne jaise apni surat jala li

Kaise kahun k kya hota ja raha hai mujhe
Apne hi hathon maine apni pehchaan mita li…!!!
Dil ko choo gayi apki yeh nazm.. tearyeyed
Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat..
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«Reply #9 on: November 23, 2010, 01:22:50 PM »
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Quote from: ~~Hriday~~ on November 23, 2010, 10:44:52 AM
kisi ke paas aake duur jaana asaan nahi,
kisi ko chaah ke bhulaana asaan nahi,

socha tha bhool jaayenge tumhe bahut jald,
par jo saanson me ho use mitaana asaan nahi....
Bahaut bahaut khoob Kapil Dost..
Kahan gum ho aj kal..?
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«Reply #10 on: November 23, 2010, 05:00:12 PM »
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bas yahi adaa aapki humko majboor karti hai aapko padhne ke liye...
kya kehne aapke dil ki Kasak ka Kasak ji...

chhu liya tumne mujhe door reh kar bhi aaj
waise to kareeb reh kar bhi tumse mujhme samaaya na gaya... !

bahut khoob Kasak Ji...

Intezar !
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2010, 04:15:38 PM »
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Wah bahut hi khoob Kasak ji really heart touching n mindblowing creation,great lines by Hriday ji,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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