Jahan kabhi tum raha karte the...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on May 03, 2011, 01:11:51 PM
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Aaj main tumhare us ghar mein gyi,
jahan kabhi tum raha karte the,

un sidiyo {stairs} pe tumhare ansuo ka gilpan mehsus hua,
jo hamari judai ki khabar sunke baha karte the,

us barande {balcony} mein tumhari tadap bahut mehsus hui,
jahan khade ho kar tum mujhse apne dil ka haal kaha karte the,

jab ghar lauti sath apne us bechaini aur dard ko bhi le aayi,
jab ek duje k hote hue bhi faaslo ka dard hum saha karte the,

Aaj main tumhare us ghar mein gyi..
jahan kabhi tum raha karte the.........


The house was empty but still i felt ur presence there...
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2011, 01:57:45 PM »
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bht khoob geet ji...
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2011, 03:29:39 PM »
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acha hai…
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2011, 09:10:15 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob di..
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Ek ashaar yaad agaya yeh nazm parr kar:

Aj jo bichra hai woh zindagi se toh sirf yeh fark mehsus hua,
Jahan pehle dil tha aj wahan dard rehta hai..!
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2011, 05:00:59 AM »
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wah wah geetji.. bahut khub....
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2011, 07:44:06 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 03, 2011, 01:11:51 PM


Aaj main tumhare us ghar mein gyi,
jahan kabhi tum raha karte the,

un sidiyo {stairs} pe tumhare ansuo ka gilpan mehsus hua,
jo hamari judai ki khabar sunke baha karte the,

us barande {balcony} mein tumhari tadap bahut mehsus hui,
jahan khade ho kar tum mujhse apne dil ka haal kaha karte the,

jab ghar lauti sath apne us bechaini aur dard ko bhi le aayi,
jab ek duje k hote hue bhi faaslo ka dard hum saha karte the,

Aaj main tumhare us ghar mein gyi..
jahan kabhi tum raha karte the.........


The house was empty but still i felt ur presence there...

ashqon se sajaya aaj lafzo ko tumne broken....!
ho gayi num palkein bhi padhte padhte...........kisi bhi tahah ki taarif ka mohtaaj nahin hai ye kalaam.
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2011, 04:21:00 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on May 03, 2011, 01:57:45 PM
bht khoob geet ji...

Bahut shukriya priya ji...
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2011, 04:21:28 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on May 03, 2011, 03:29:39 PM
acha hai…



Bahut shukriya sarfira ji..
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2011, 04:22:05 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 03, 2011, 09:10:15 PM
Bahaut bahaut khoob di..
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Ek ashaar yaad agaya yeh nazm parr kar:

Aj jo bichra hai woh zindagi se toh sirf yeh fark mehsus hua,
Jahan pehle dil tha aj wahan dard rehta hai..!
Bahut sahi kaha rahim aur bahut shukriya..
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2011, 04:23:27 PM »
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Quote from: manjum on May 04, 2011, 05:00:59 AM
wah wah geetji.. bahut khub....

bahut shukriya manju mann ji..
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2011, 04:24:26 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 04, 2011, 07:44:06 AM
ashqon se sajaya aaj lafzo ko tumne broken....!
ho gayi num palkein bhi padhte padhte...........kisi bhi tahah ki taarif ka mohtaaj nahin hai ye kalaam.

Itna kaha wahi bahut hai sheba ji isse behtar is kalam k liye kaha bhi nhi kaha jaa sakta...bahut shukriya ji...Usual Smile
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