Jane kya hua jo...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on May 27, 2011, 04:29:46 PM
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Tha mujhe guroor jiske naam ka,
Jane kya hua jo usne apne naam ka rubaab chhin liya,

ab apne lafzo se main kya sawal likhu,
usne merre har sawal ka jawaab chhin liya,

uske bin kitni rate jag kar kati gyi,
kya hisb du unka jab usne har hisaab chhin liya,

rote rote beh gye merre saare sapne,
dekho aaj usne bhi mujhse merra har khwab chhin liya,

usne kaha tha mujhse ab vo aur nhi seh sakta,
uske in lafzo ne merri mhbt ka rudaad chhin liya,

kis phool se sajau main apna aashiya ab,
jo mehekata tha merre gulshan ko usne vo shadaab chhin liya,

jiski chahat mein tayyar thi GEET har kante ka dard sehene ko,
usne mujhse vo nayab sa gulaab chhin liya,

tha mujhe guroor jiske naam se judne ka...
jane kya hua jo usne apne naam ka rubaab chhin liya.........


Rudaad-kahani,story...
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2011, 04:53:22 PM »
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bahot khoob kasak ji
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2011, 04:54:39 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on May 27, 2011, 04:52:47 PM
bahot khoob kasak ji

Zara gaur farmaiyega killbill ji main GEET ho KASAK JI nhi..
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2011, 05:00:16 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 27, 2011, 04:54:39 PM
Zara gaur farmaiyega killbill ji main GEET ho KASAK JI nhi..
janta hu…
jara mere post par majar daliye ab
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janta hu…
jara mere post par majar daliye ab

ab bhi pehle jaisa hi kasak ji likha hai...
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2011, 05:38:10 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 27, 2011, 05:33:14 PM
ab bhi pehle jaisa hi kasak ji likha hai...
aap to samjhi hi nahi mera matlb
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2011, 05:38:33 PM »
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Good Job Geet Ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2011, 05:42:22 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on May 27, 2011, 05:38:10 PM
aap to samjhi hi nahi mera matlb

Waqai nhi smjhi thik se smjhaiye?
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2011, 05:44:06 PM »
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Quote from: Niha Khan on May 27, 2011, 05:38:33 PM
Good Job Geet Ji

Thnx niha ji..
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2011, 03:56:25 AM »
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wah bahut bahut khub geetji..... bahut badiya...
dard ka ehsas bahut gahara dil tk jata hua....

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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2011, 12:10:56 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 27, 2011, 06:19:56 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji

Khuda Aapko Sukun Bakshe

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Bahut shukriya shihab ji..
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Quote from: manjum on May 28, 2011, 03:56:25 AM
wah bahut bahut khub geetji..... bahut badiya...
dard ka ehsas bahut gahara dil tk jata hua....

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Bahut shukriya manjumann ji..
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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2011, 12:21:36 PM »
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Bahut Hi Badhiya geetji..
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Quote from: khwaish on May 28, 2011, 12:21:36 PM
Bahut Hi Badhiya geetji..

Shukriya khwaish ji...
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bahut khub GEET Ji wahhhhh.........
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