JINDAGI KI RAAH

by jasbirsingh on November 25, 2008, 09:17:01 PM
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«Reply #60 on: December 13, 2008, 11:46:26 AM »
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bahoot khoob lil bro..

bahoot achi lines share ki hai apne....

Lil bro, apne likhne ko kaha hai, so kuch likh rahi hu... pata nahi in lino main chupe dard ka arth koi samjh akega ya nahi...

Zinagi itani nazdeek se dekhin ki ajnabi ho gai
sehmi sehmi bhawnao main, gumo ki bandagi ho gai
kabhi bahoot shor to kabhi jaanleva khamoshi
kaya socha tha aor kaya yah pooja ki zindagi ho gai
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«Reply #61 on: December 14, 2008, 03:33:52 PM »
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bahoot khoob lil bro..

bahoot achi lines share ki hai apne....

Lil bro, apne likhne ko kaha hai, so kuch likh rahi hu... pata nahi in lino main chupe dard ka arth koi samjh akega ya nahi...

Zinagi itani nazdeek se dekhin ki ajnabi ho gai
sehmi sehmi bhawnao main, gumo ki bandagi ho gai
kabhi bahoot shor to kabhi jaanleva khamoshi
kaya socha tha aor kaya yah pooja ki zindagi ho gai

Bohat Achche,.
Pooja Ki Zindagi Ke saath Azeem Ki Bhi Yahi Zindagi Ho gayi,.
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«Reply #62 on: December 14, 2008, 07:40:33 PM »
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bahoot khoob lil bro..

bahoot achi lines share ki hai apne....

Lil bro, apne likhne ko kaha hai, so kuch likh rahi hu... pata nahi in lino main chupe dard ka arth koi samjh akega ya nahi...

Zinagi itani nazdeek se dekhin ki ajnabi ho gai
sehmi sehmi bhawnao main, gumo ki bandagi ho gai
kabhi bahoot shor to kabhi jaanleva khamoshi
kaya socha tha aor kaya yah pooja ki zindagi ho gai


bahut khoob kaha JI aap neh, par jara yeh bhi socho aap


JINDAGI KI RAAH AISEY HI HOTI HAI
JAISA CHAHA, WAISA KAM HI HOTI HAI
MIL JAYE GAR SAB KUCH CHAHAT SEY
FIR KHUDA KI JARURAT KAM HI HOTI HAI



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #63 on: December 14, 2008, 08:02:40 PM »
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Bohat Achche,.
Pooja Ki Zindagi Ke saath Azeem Ki Bhi Yahi Zindagi Ho gayi,.

so sweet lil bro....

bhagwaan se dua ki yah zindagi meri he rahe
is zindagi ka saya bhi kabhi tujh per na parre
her bala teri yah didi le le khud per
khushio ki har jagah barsaat tujh per barasti rahe,,,
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«Reply #64 on: December 14, 2008, 08:03:43 PM »
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bahut khoob kaha JI aap neh, par jara yeh bhi socho aap


JINDAGI KI RAAH AISEY HI HOTI HAI
JAISA CHAHA, WAISA KAM HI HOTI HAI
MIL JAYE GAR SAB KUCH CHAHAT SEY
FIR KHUDA KI JARURAT KAM HI HOTI HAI



JASBIR SINGH

bahoot sahi farmaya jas ji,... bahoot acha likha hai apne
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«Reply #65 on: December 14, 2008, 08:10:57 PM »
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bahoot sahi farmaya jas ji,... bahoot acha likha hai apne


thanks JI
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«Reply #66 on: December 19, 2008, 02:04:23 PM »
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so sweet lil bro....

bhagwaan se dua ki yah zindagi meri he rahe
is zindagi ka saya bhi kabhi tujh per na parre
her bala teri yah didi le le khud per
khushio ki har jagah barsaat tujh per barasti rahe,,,

Nice One Didijaan,.
Yunhi Likhte raho,.
May Allah Bless U,.
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«Reply #67 on: December 19, 2008, 04:09:13 PM »
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JINDAGI KI RAAH MEH ABB KAHA JAYENGEY
HAMEY KYA PATA ABB KAB MUSKURAYENGEY
AISA RULA KAR CHALA GAYA HAI KOI
NA JANEY KAB CHAIN SEY SOH PAYENGEY


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #68 on: December 19, 2008, 05:01:42 PM »
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Zindagi ki raah maut tak le jayenge
Ab yun to muskurana kab hoga pata nahi
Rulane wale ko kahan dhoond payenge
Ab Maut ke saath chain se soh payenge

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«Reply #69 on: December 20, 2008, 04:44:17 AM »
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Dosto!
Gam hongey, khushee hogee; kabhi wasl, kabhi hijra;
Zeeney kaa houslaa hai, to, bas jiiye jaayiye!
Yeh meil-jol, dostee key paig shab-o-roz:
Haan, zindagi ko zindagee kaa saath chaahiye!!

                                  - abd bundeli
                         
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«Reply #70 on: December 24, 2008, 03:22:18 PM »
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Nice ABD Ji
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«Reply #71 on: December 24, 2008, 03:26:17 PM »
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Nice ABD Ji
Thanks, Rajesh Harish ji!
               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #72 on: December 24, 2008, 04:36:59 PM »
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Bohat Khoob,.
Bohat Khoob,.
Jasbir Bhai,.
Rajesh Bhai,.
Abd Bhaiya,.
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«Reply #73 on: December 24, 2008, 04:53:16 PM »
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bahoot khoob lil bro..

bahoot achi lines share ki hai apne....

Lil bro, apne likhne ko kaha hai, so kuch likh rahi hu... pata nahi in lino main chupe dard ka arth koi samjh akega ya nahi...

Zinagi itani nazdeek se dekhin ki ajnabi ho gai
sehmi sehmi bhawnao main, gumo ki bandagi ho gai
kabhi bahoot shor to kabhi jaanleva khamoshi
kaya socha tha aor kaya yah pooja ki zindagi ho gai

bahut acche Pooja di..
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«Reply #74 on: December 24, 2008, 06:32:52 PM »
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Bohat Khoob,.
Bohat Khoob,.
Jasbir Bhai,.
Rajesh Bhai,.
Abd Bhaiya,.


Thanks Jahanasheen


Jasbir Singh
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