Jindagi...

by gunjanbadhey on December 11, 2004, 04:11:11 PM
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Ye hasin lamhe intazaar ke...
jo gujare humney tumhari yaad mein,
aab yahi mera jiwan hai , jo bit gaya wo sunhara pal hai

humne ye na socha tha ki din ye bhi aayenge...
teri ek ek zalak ko nain taras jayenge...
aab hal na pucho kaisa hai...
muze lagta ek ek paal lamba ek saal jaisa hai...
aab yahi mera jiwan hai........

jaab dekha tha maine tuzko...
aisa laga mano mil gaya jiwan sathi muzko..
lekin muze kya pata tha wo ek hasin sapna hai..
tuze paakar aab muze khona hai...
Aab yahi mera jiwan hai.....


-Gunjan
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2004, 04:57:53 PM »
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very nice


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akela
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2004, 12:38:49 PM »
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jindagi jo thune diya,woh kam na tha,
par lamha wo tha aur ,jab koi gam na tha
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nishita
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2004, 03:39:57 PM »
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nice all Usual Smile
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2004, 04:05:27 PM »
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Quote from: "akela"
jindagi jo thune diya,woh kam na tha,
par lamha wo tha aur ,jab koi gam na tha



vvovv!! akela ji!!!


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gunjanbadhey
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2004, 05:10:15 PM »
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hi to all...
         thanx 4 ur complements... hoping to do my best... since i m new to the world od shayaris... but i m also want to say u that... ur really a gurus... i read ur shayris.. they r really.. impressive... so hoping ur good response in future...
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Princess21
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2005, 07:45:25 AM »
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nice nice buhat khoob
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SADIQA JAWED
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2005, 09:20:36 AM »
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WOW EVERY ONE Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2010, 07:19:28 AM »
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tumhare na aane ke bahane sau hai,

maut kya tumhare jaisi nahi hai,

jo bulane par na aaye.................
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«Reply #9 on: December 15, 2010, 07:58:04 AM »
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kya bat kahi hai sanjiv ji

wo aakar baithe mere pas kuch der
humare aansu palkon se chhalak gaye
chhate the wo le lein hume bahon me
par wo nazrein churakar chale gaye
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«Reply #10 on: December 15, 2010, 08:30:31 AM »
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bahut badhiya koshish he gunjan ji..

kafi achhe shabd istemaal kiye he apne..kahin kahin utaar bhi lage par overall bahut achha hai..

kuchh apni taraf se pesh karta hun..

me teri yad me zindgi; zindagi bhar bhatakta raha
tu aaye gi lekar subah; bas isi aas me na soya jagta raha~
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #11 on: December 15, 2010, 08:42:37 AM »
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Ye hasin lamhe intazaar ke...
jo gujare humney tumhari yaad mein,
aab yahi mera jiwan hai , jo bit gaya wo sunhara pal hai

humne ye na socha tha ki din ye bhi aayenge...
teri ek ek zalak ko nain taras jayenge...
aab hal na pucho kaisa hai...
muze lagta ek ek paal lamba ek saal jaisa hai...
aab yahi mera jiwan hai........

jaab dekha tha maine tuzko...
aisa laga mano mil gaya jiwan sathi muzko..
lekin muze kya pata tha wo ek hasin sapna hai..
tuze paakar aab muze khona hai...
Aab yahi mera jiwan hai.....


-Gunjan
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Good one Ji
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rajni bhatia
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2013, 03:11:26 PM »
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bohat pyara likhea
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