jo giya :Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

chitralsony

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janay aj yay dil yun tanha tanha kyun hai
sansain hum sai yun khafa khafa kyun hain
neend ab apnay he bister pai kyun nahi ati
gher apna he hum ko ab lagta paraya kyun hai
jo giya hai hum sai dur ab na milnay kailiyay
phir osi kai nam pai he yay dil dharkta kyun hai
jisay taira sath chornay pai zara bhi afsus nahi
os sitm gr kai liyay ashak bhata kyun hai
bitay lamhon ki rakh pai yun baith kai hina
bai wafawon kai liay dil ko jalata kyun hai


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KOYAL46

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Re: jo giya

«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2010, 07:01:45 PM »

ACHHA kalaam hai aapka....Chitra-di.... Applause

Jo chale gaye chhod k wo kab laut-te hain
Ye insaan ki shakl me bewafa bhediye hain

Quote from: chitralsony on May 02, 2010, 06:30:38 PM


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madhuwesh

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Re: jo giya

«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2010, 08:20:10 PM »

Wah bahut khoob Chitra ji bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likhi aapne.very touching poem.Koyal ji aapne bhi kamaal ke lines likhi.excellent Hats off to you!


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chitralsony

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Re: jo giya

«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2010, 08:58:46 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on May 02, 2010, 07:01:45 PM

ACHHA kalaam hai aapka....Chitra-di.... Applause

Jo chale gaye chhod k wo kab laut-te hain
Ye insaan ki shakl me bewafa bhediye hain

shokriya koyal je


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chitralsony

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Re: jo giya

«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2010, 09:07:02 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 02, 2010, 08:20:10 PM

Wah bahut khoob Chitra ji bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likhi aapne.very touching poem.Koyal ji aapne bhi kamaal ke lines likhi.excellent Hats off to you!

thank u madho sis


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KOYAL46

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Re: jo giya

«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2010, 12:09:30 PM »

Thanks Madhu-di.....

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 02, 2010, 08:20:10 PM

Wah bahut khoob Chitra ji bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likhi aapne.very touching poem.Koyal ji aapne bhi kamaal ke lines likhi.excellent Hats off to you!