***Juda ho gaya***

by ALONE BAD on December 14, 2006, 08:52:59 AM
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** Aae mere dost ye kya ho gaya
aaj tu mujhsae juda ho gaya

na din dhalega ab na raat kategi
silsila ye mere sath kya ho gaya

chupa liyae thae maine sab gam apnae
kissa yae aankhon sae bayan ho gaya

zee loonga ab main bhi kisi tarha
zindagi sae mera rafta ho gaya..........***


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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2006, 02:32:10 PM »
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Bohot khoob ALONE BAD !!

Nice one Majid !
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2006, 03:14:51 AM »
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Bohat khoob Alone Bad & Majid...
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2006, 11:46:36 PM »
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Yu to naye logo se itni duri nahi hoti
Jo bichde hai unki kami puri nahi hoti
Chalte rahete hai tanha rasto par yuhi
Manzil ko pane ki koshish puri nahi hoti
Karte nahi hai abto ham teri zustzu bhi
Lekin teri yaado se nind puri nahi hoti
Haskar gale laga lu ab apne gam ko bhi
Sach hai ki har tamanna puri nahi hoti


ahaaa... very good Majid ji..[/color]

Bichara hai jo ek bar toh milte nahi dekha
Es zakam ko humne kabi silate nahi dekha

Ek bar jise chat gayee dhoop ki kwayeesh
Phir shank pe us phool ko khilte nahi dekha

Achanak gira hai, toh jade taq nikal aayee
Jis ped ko aandhi main bi hilte nahi dekha

Kanto main gire phool ko chum aayegi, lekin
Titli ke paro ko kabi chilte nahi dekha

Kis tarah mere ruh hari ker gaya aakhir
Wo zeher jism me khilte nahi dekha..!!
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«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2006, 12:49:14 AM »
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Bohat khoob Roja...

Faasla Tau Hai Magar Koyi Faasla Nahi
Mujhse Tum Juda Sahi Dilse Tau Juda Nahi
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«Reply #5 on: December 18, 2006, 12:52:03 AM »
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good work every one!
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«Reply #6 on: December 18, 2006, 12:58:46 AM »
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Thanks Tosha...
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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2006, 01:47:54 AM »
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Bohat khoob Roja...

Faasla Tau Hai Magar Koyi Faasla Nahi
Mujhse Tum Juda Sahi Dilse Tau Juda Nahi


Shukhriya Aryaan ji..

Nazar main koyee ab tehra nahi hai
Ye kya kar diya aapne nazre milake..!!  :lol:
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2006, 01:51:12 AM »
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** Aae mere dost ye kya ho gaya
aaj tu mujhsae juda ho gaya

na din dhalega ab na raat kategi
silsila ye mere sath kya ho gaya

chupa liyae thae maine sab gam apnae
kissa yae aankhon sae bayan ho gaya

zee loonga ab main bhi kisi tarha
zindagi sae mera rafta ho gaya..........***




Bahut khoob...

Judayee ka aalam koyee us.se pooche
Sehar ho gayee ho jis.se rote-rote ... :cry:
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2007, 11:47:08 AM »
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Yu to naye logo se itni duri nahi hoti
Jo bichde hai unki kami puri nahi hoti
Chalte rahete hai tanha rasto par yuhi
Manzil ko pane ki koshish puri nahi hoti
Karte nahi hai abto ham teri zustzu bhi
Lekin teri yaado se nind puri nahi hoti
Haskar gale laga lu ab apne gam ko bhi
Sach hai ki har tamanna puri nahi hoti



thanx Majid Ji.... aapne bhi superb likha hai.....
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«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2007, 11:51:49 AM »
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shukriya Talat ji..... Aryan ji..... bhaoot bahoot shukriya.....
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2007, 11:53:56 AM »
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shukriya Roja ji... aapne bahoot aacha likha hai......
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«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2007, 11:55:50 AM »
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good work every one!


thanx Tosha ji.....
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