-----/// Judaai ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on August 08, 2013, 11:49:25 PM
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jin   raahon    se   tum  duur  gaye  the
un  raahon   ko   dekhtaa  jaataa hoon
kabhi   to   laut   ke  aaoge  tum,  main
khud   hi   khud   ko  samjhaataa hoon

tasveer    tumhaari    dekh   dekh   kar
akele   hi    main    muskuraataa   hoon
kamre   ki   deewaaron     se   ghir  kar
tumhaare  geet   gungunaataa    hoon

koi  dekh  naa le   kahin   aansoo  mere
baarish  mein   bheegtaa   jaataa  hoon
chhipaa  ke   baarish   ke   paani   mein
apne   aansooo   main  bahaataa  hoon

ret   pe   tumhaaraa    naam     likh  kar
khud   hi   use    main    mitaataa  hoon
lehren  unhe    bahaanaa    chaahe    to
mitti     se    lipat    main   jaataa  hoon

koi   nahi    jo    sambhaale   mujhe   ab
har kadam pe main ladkhadaataa hoon
bas   tumhaare  ek  deedaar  ki  khaatir
deewaano  saa  bhataktaa jaataa hoon

zindagi   hi  mere  saath   nahi ab, main
zindagi    kaa   saath  nibhaataa   hoon
kabhi   to  phir  se  milogi  tum mujhse
bas  is  ummeed se jeetaa  jaataa hoon


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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2013, 12:37:45 AM »
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Bahut badhiya likha hai Hriday jee aapne.
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2013, 12:45:09 AM »
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Bahut khoob hriday jee..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2013, 09:26:01 AM »
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waah waah kapil bahut achhee peshkash
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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2013, 10:05:54 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2013, 11:29:32 AM »
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kya baat.....super.....
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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2013, 08:45:37 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बहुत ही खूब....ज़वाब नहीं...ह्रदय जी....

ret   pe   tumhaaraa    naam     likh  kar
khud   hi   use    main    mitaataa  hoon
lehren  unhe    bahaanaa    chaahe    to
mitti     se    lipat    main   jaataa  hoon

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«Reply #7 on: August 09, 2013, 08:48:34 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2013, 12:56:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Mukesh ji....!!!

Bahut badhiya likha hai Hriday jee aapne.
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2013, 12:58:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa  Ashwani ji....!!!

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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2013, 12:59:53 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

waah waah kapil bahut achhee peshkash
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2013, 01:00:28 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ...!!!

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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2013, 01:01:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Miraj ji....!!!

kya baat.....super.....
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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2013, 01:05:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Amit ji....!!!

वाह....वाह....बहुत ही खूब....ज़वाब नहीं...ह्रदय जी....

ret   pe   tumhaaraa    naam     likh  kar
khud   hi   use    main    mitaataa  hoon
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«Reply #14 on: August 16, 2013, 01:06:58 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Prashad ji....!!!

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