Judaai Ka Manzar

by Jaanasheen on August 07, 2007, 01:13:51 PM
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Chaa Jaati Hai Tanhaai Mehfilon Mein..
Jab Judaai Ka Manzar Hota hai,..
Kya Kahein Kisi Ko Kitna Khatheen,..
Zindagi Ka Safar Hota Hai,..

Jab Judaai ka Manzar Hota hai,..

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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2007, 04:33:36 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 20, 2007, 01:41:30 PM »
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Shukriya Ricky Ji<..
Aap Kuch Likhte To Kuch Seekhne Ko Milta,..
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2007, 01:44:40 PM »
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Judaai Ki Halaat Na Kam Hone Ko Hai,..
Humne To Aas Ab Bhi Nahi Chordi Tumne Milne Ki,..

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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2007, 08:03:20 PM »
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I will sure try to write replies in poetry .Just little problem time these days.
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2007, 09:33:32 AM »
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Teri Judaai Ka Waqt Hadd Se Bard Gaya,.
Ke Ab Bas Mein Nahi Dil Ko Tera Intezaar Karna,.
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2007, 02:07:29 PM »
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Very good Jaanasheen ji..

"Roja" bayan kya kare apni juban se samne unke
Bedard bankar unhi ke liye huye sitam mujh per

Chod gaya saath woh is zalim zamane ke darr se
Zindagi ber saath rehne ka barosa tha jis per..

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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2007, 05:25:07 PM »
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Shukriya Roja Ji,.
And NiceOne.,
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2007, 05:28:43 PM »
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Dum Labon Par Hai Agar Ab Bhi Nahi Aaoge.
Laash Paaoge Meri Mujhko Na Paaoge,.
Behtar Yahi Hai Ke tum Muhse Mera Haal na Poocho.,
Mera Haal Sunoge Tum To Tadap Jaaoge,.

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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2007, 02:19:30 AM »
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Agar jana chahte ho toh hame ye jata kar chale jana
Jo banaya tha milkar aashiya.n usse mita kar chale jana
Kis khata ki saja de rahe ho tum is "Roja" ko sanam
Aakhir hamara kiya hua kasoor toh bata kar chale jana..[/color]
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2007, 10:06:53 AM »
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Nice One Roja Ji,.
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«Reply #11 on: October 10, 2007, 12:41:28 PM »
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Very Nice Janasheen and Roja
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«Reply #12 on: October 11, 2007, 05:38:57 AM »
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bhoot khoob jaansheen ji and roja ji..... =D>

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«Reply #13 on: October 14, 2007, 07:11:55 AM »
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Chaa Jaati Hai Tanhaai Mehfilon Mein..
Jab Judaai Ka Manzar Hota hai,..
Kya Kahein Kisi Ko Kitna Khatheen,..
Zindagi Ka Safar Hota Hai,..

Jab Judaai ka Manzar Hota hai,..

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waaah Jaanasheen sahab...bahoot khuubb....
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«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2007, 07:17:05 AM »
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Very good Jaanasheen ji..

"Roja" bayan kya kare apni juban se samne unke
Bedard bankar unhi ke liye huye sitam mujh per

Chod gaya saath woh is zalim zamane ke darr se
Zindagi ber saath rehne ka barosa tha jis per..

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bahoot khuuub Roja ji.... bahoot aacha likha hai...
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