Judaai..

by Pundreek on December 14, 2005, 03:43:18 PM
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Us din jab maine muqaddar ko khoya,
uski tasveer ko jab aasuon main bhigoya,
ki kaash dil ki haalat woh dekh leti,
aankhein to royi,par har aansu ka katra bhi roya...
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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2005, 08:55:05 AM »
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very nice pudreek ji

Kaash yeh dil na hota,
Dil jo hota to bechaini na hoti
Bechaini jo hoti to pyar na hota
Pyar jo hota yeh tadap na hoti
Yeh tadap jo hoti to judayi na hoti
Judayi hi hai jo chain lene nahi deti..
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2005, 01:13:14 PM »
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very nice pudreek ji

Kaash yeh dil na hota,
Dil jo hota to bechaini na hoti
Bechaini jo hoti to pyar na hota
Pyar jo hota yeh tadap na hoti
Yeh tadap jo hoti to judayi na hoti
Judayi hi hai jo chain lene nahi deti..



Shukriya kapoor ji! Aapne toh 6 lineno mail sachhai samet di!! Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2005, 09:26:58 AM »
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thanks pudreek ji aur kuch likhiye na
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