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THIS IS MY FIRST PROJECT WELL I AM JUST A 17 YEAR OLD SO IF THERE IS ANY MISTAKE PLEASE FORGIVE ME I HAVE WRITTEN THIS COZ MY BELOVED HAS FLOWN TO USA SO ....
MAT KAR PYAR AAY MERE DOST KI TU BHI PACHTAEGA
AAJ YE PYAR JITNA HASATA HAI, YE KAL UTNA HI RULAEGA
YE PADH KE MAT HAS ,TUJHE BHI MERE IN SHABDO KI YAAD AAEGI
US DIN JAB TERI MEHBOOBA TUJHE CHOD KE JAEGI
HUM NE BHI PYAR ME JUDAI PAYI, ISLIYE BATA RAHE HAI
TUM ABHI YEHI SOCH RAHE HO, KYU HUM TUMHE SATA RAHE HAI
PYAR KE JOSH ME KISI KI BAAT MAANE KA MAN NAHI KARTA
DIL TOOTNE KE BAAD KISI BHI KAAM ME MAN NAHI LAGTA.
TUM MERI BAAT NAHI MANOGE ME BHI JANTA HU
MAINE BHI KISIKI BAAT NAHI MANI THI MAI YE BHI MANTA HU
ISILIYE TO KHUDA NE DIL SHEESHAY KA BANAYA HOTA HAI
MERA DIL IS TARAH TUTA KI AKELE ME BHI ROTA HAI
TUT GAYE HUMSE SAARE RISHTE MAGAR
UNSE HAMARA JO RISHTA THA VOH APNI JAGAH
DIL KO HAI UNSE NA MILNE KA YAKEEN MAGAR
UNSE MILNE KI MANNAT AUR DUA APNI JAGAH........
PLEASE GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS AS I HAVE NOTHING LEFT TO LIVE FOR...
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Sonu
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2006, 05:07:15 AM » |
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darde dil udas mat hoo... koi bat nahi vo vaps ahygi vo tumhey dukha to nahi deyker gayee na to phir preyshan keo hutey ho uska email hai na tumahrey pass to usko yea bheyju... nice hia yea darde dil... ager bura na manu to apka nam keya hai or apki gf ka keya nam hia or vo usa mey kha gayee hai mey bhi usa mey hee hoo ager meyrey sath kuch sair kerna cahow to ker saktey ho...
Teri yaad main yeh dil ab bhi bayqarar rahta hai
Mujhay aaj bhi her shab tera intizar rahta hai
Tujhay kho kar bhi bhol nahi pata hoon main
Her lamhay teri bekrari ka khumar rahta hai
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darde_dil
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2006, 05:12:45 AM » |
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Actually i have already mailed to ur YAHOO ID
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Sonu
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2006, 05:17:53 AM » |
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ok thanks i got it
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2006, 07:01:45 AM » |
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Aaj gum me kyun ho ye puchne ka kisi ko haq nahi
Khushi me Kisi ne ye sawaal nahi pucha isme mujhe koi shaq nahi
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Sonu
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2006, 03:44:37 PM » |
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bahu khoob abhi..
gamu ki mehphil mey tumsey koi seval keya kreyga
unkeey any key he khushi eni thi key humsey pucha he na gaya
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2006, 06:39:20 PM » |
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BOHOT BADHIYA!!!!
Voh khushi hi kya jo seh na sake
Voh Gum bhi kya jo aansu beh na sake
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2006, 09:41:06 PM » |
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thanks abhi...
khushi to sab milker batleyey hai
koi gum batey to bat or hugi
es tapti dhup mey mehkadi sey mulaka hugi
vo ahey yea na ahey
mager es dil ko unkey aney ki ass jaror hugi
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2006, 11:34:23 AM » |
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KATPUTLIYO KA KHEL YE DUNIYA, UPARWALA CHALATA HAI
USNE HI PYAR KA KHEL BANAYA VOHI DIL CHURATA HAI
UNSE VAHI MILATA HAI AUR ZAGDE VAHI KARATA HAI
HUM SAB TOH HAI USKI HAATH KI PUTLIYA VAHI DIL DHADKATA HAI
YE SAB KARNE KE BAAD BHI USE ZARA BHI CHAIN NAHI AATA HAI
ISLIYE BICH SAFAR ME JUDA DONO KO KARKE KHUN KE AANSU PILATA HAI
FIR DEKHTA HAI PYAR HAI SACHA TOH FIR SE UNHE MILATA HAI
AUR USE LAGE KE BHUL GAYE VOH TOH NAYA HUMSAFAR DILATA HAI
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2006, 07:22:29 PM » |
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nice abhi(gittu)...
Dukh hain agar jeevan mein abhi
Khushiyon se jhoomega ik din sansaar saara
Aayega jeevan mein khushi bhi
Hamesha to nahin rehta raat ka andhera
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2006, 07:30:46 PM » |
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Abhi Raat Ka Andhera Chhaya Hai, Suraj Ke Samne Bhi Kale Badlo Ka Saya Hai Itne Gum Toh De Chuka Khuda Ab Aaj Kaunse Naye Gum Laya HAI?  |
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«Reply #11 on: January 21, 2006, 03:41:05 AM » |
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wonderful abhi(gittu)...
raat key andheyru sey humey dar legta hai
din key ujaley mey jee ghabrata hai
ghav etney miley humko key marham lega na sakey
gum mey esey dubey key phir muskura na sakey
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«Reply #12 on: January 21, 2006, 03:58:17 AM » |
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KUCH NAHI DOSTO LAGE RAHO APNI BARBADI KI OR
YE MAHOBAT NAHI KOI OR CHIZ HAI JO TUMHE KHICH RAHI HAI
PLS VAPAS AA JAO OR JO TUMHARE FARZ HAI UN ME APNA VAKT NIKALO
BEST OF LUCK
FROM KADAR PATHAN
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«Reply #13 on: January 21, 2006, 04:02:30 AM » |
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kadar pathan bahi... yea mahobat nahi yea judai ka dard hia... jo kambhakhat bhut beyram huta hai... dil per chut eysey koi dey jata hai jeysey koi bread per butter lega rha hai... per dil valey to zakham kha per bhi muskuratey rehtey hai... or mar mar ker bhi fraz apna nibajatey hai...
thanks for best of luck..
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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2006, 06:27:33 AM » |
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Thank U Kadar Bhai For Ur Lovely Comments!!!!!
Bohot Kareeb Se Dekha Hai Is Zamane Ko
Kisi Ne Kabhi Pyar Se Pucha Bhi Nahi Is Deewane Ko!!
Ab Kisise Milne Ka Darr Lagta Hai Na Jane Kyu
Ab Dil Nahi Karta Kisise Dil Lagane Ko!!!!!!!!!!!
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on eTI community..
