~ * Kabhi kabhi * ~_DeV

by thinkhattk on September 15, 2010, 11:02:20 AM
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Kabhi mom ban ke pigal gaye,
Kabhi girtey girtey sambhal gaye,

Wo ban ke lamhaa guzer gaye,
Mere pass hi se nikal gaye,

Use rokti bhi to kiss tarah,
Ke wo shakhs itna ajeeb tha,

Kabhi tadap utha meree aah se,
Kabhi ashak se na pigal saka,

Sarey raah mila wo ager kabhi,
To nazer chhura ke guzer gaye,

Wo utar gaya meri aankho se,
Mere dil mai kyu na utar saka,

Wo chala ye sheher chhod ke,
Wo waha se phir na palat saka,

Wo sambhal gaya tha mager,
Mein bikhar ke phir na simat saki....
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 11:09:39 AM »
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waah waah thinkhattk ji. ji kamaaaaaal kar diya .
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 11:12:15 AM »
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bahot baht sukriya suresh ji....
par mera naam devika nahi he.... NaNaNa  Laughing hard  Giggle
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 11:15:30 AM »
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sorryji. icon_scratch icon_scratch
hum to dev se devika hi samajhte hain.
please tell me.
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 11:19:21 AM »
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koi baat nahi suresh ji hota he kabhi kabhi....
mera devangi he.... ab matt bhul jaiyega.... Winking
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 11:31:33 AM »
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bahut achha likha he jiii....daad anhi poora dada kubool kijiye...
ham to apko HE- samajh rahe the ap to SHE -nikale ..

chaliye koi nahi...honda e kabhi kabhi~
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2010, 11:33:27 AM »
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sukriya dada ji....
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 11:38:34 AM »
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Devangi jee, bahaut zada maza aya parr kar..bahaut khoob..bahaut ehsaason kay saath parra hai maine..mehsoos karte hue..dil se daad duaon kay saath.. Applause
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2010, 11:43:49 AM »
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bahot bahot sukriya rahim isse padhne ke liye....
aapko itna waqt to milla, yahi kafi he hamare liye.....
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 11:56:33 AM »
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wah wah su vaat chhe, khoob saras lakyu chhe Dev...
just superbe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Quote from: thinkhattk on September 15, 2010, 11:02:20 AM



Kabhi mom ban ke pigal gaye,
Kabhi girtey girtey sambhal gaye,

Wo ban ke lamhaa guzer gaye,
Mere pass hi se nikal gaye,

Use rokti bhi to kiss tarah,
Ke wo shakhs itna ajeeb tha,

Kabhi tadap utha meree aah se,
Kabhi ashak se na pigal saka,

Sarey raah mila wo ager kabhi,
To nazer chhura ke guzer gaye,

Wo utar gaya meri aankho se,
Mere dil mai kyu na utar saka,

Wo chala ye sheher chhod ke,
Wo waha se phir na palat saka,

Wo sambhal gaya tha mager,
Mein bikhar ke phir na simat saki....
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2010, 12:02:21 PM »
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Wow....Bahuj saras chhe...... su vaat chhe Baku..... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kone puchhe chhe "Do you love me.."

Wo tou aawaara hawa ka jhoka tha
Tujhe chhu k yuhi gujar gaya tha

Wo to muh mod k sambhal gaya tha
Phir tujhe he kyu beekharnaa tha


Quote from: thinkhattk on September 15, 2010, 11:02:20 AM



Kabhi mom ban ke pigal gaye,
Kabhi girtey girtey sambhal gaye,

Wo ban ke lamhaa guzer gaye,
Mere pass hi se nikal gaye,

Use rokti bhi to kiss tarah,
Ke wo shakhs itna ajeeb tha,

Kabhi tadap utha meree aah se,
Kabhi ashak se na pigal saka,

Sarey raah mila wo ager kabhi,
To nazer chhura ke guzer gaye,

Wo utar gaya meri aankho se,
Mere dil mai kyu na utar saka,

Wo chala ye sheher chhod ke,
Wo waha se phir na palat saka,

Wo sambhal gaya tha mager,
Mein bikhar ke phir na simat saki....
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2010, 01:04:48 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob likha hai aapne Devangi ji,,,!!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 15, 2010, 01:13:21 PM »
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Dev Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai kam lafzoN meiN khoob kaha hai aapne ...
Very wel poetryed.. Daad kabool kijiye

Likhate rahiye.....
Khuda hafez....... Usual Smile
         


Meri ummid ke charaag bujh gaye, Mere Zabt ki shaam dhal gayi
Teri raah dekh dekha kar, Mere jism se jaan nikal gayi... sad5

Thi ulfaateN jitni mujhse kabhi, woh sab fasaane ban gaye
Mere aik naam ke saath hi zamaane ki nazaareN badal gayi       
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«Reply #13 on: September 16, 2010, 12:56:58 AM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on September 15, 2010, 11:02:20 AM



Kabhi mom ban ke pigal gaye,
Kabhi girtey girtey sambhal gaye,

Wo ban ke lamhaa guzer gaye,
Mere pass hi se nikal gaye,

Use rokti bhi to kiss tarah,
Ke wo shakhs itna ajeeb tha,

Kabhi tadap utha meree aah se,
Kabhi ashak se na pigal saka,

Sarey raah mila wo ager kabhi,
To nazer chhura ke guzer gaye,

Wo utar gaya meri aankho se,
Mere dil mai kyu na utar saka,

Wo chala ye sheher chhod ke,
Wo waha se phir na palat saka,

Wo sambhal gaya tha mager,
Mein bikhar ke phir na simat saki....


Aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko ... nazdeek tak chuute chale gaye... bahut khoob ! dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #14 on: September 16, 2010, 10:22:28 AM »
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baku koine nahi puchhyu me, image muki chhe bas kai nahi biju....

Wo tha hi aesa jhoka ki,
muje sath me bikherr gaya....

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 15, 2010, 12:02:21 PM
Wow....Bahuj saras chhe...... su vaat chhe Baku..... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kone puchhe chhe "Do you love me.."

Wo tou aawaara hawa ka jhoka tha
Tujhe chhu k yuhi gujar gaya tha

Wo to muh mod k sambhal gaya tha
Phir tujhe he kyu beekharnaa tha
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