~ * Kabhi kabhi * ~_DeV

by thinkhattk on September 15, 2010, 11:02:20 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 16, 2010, 10:23:55 AM »
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bahot bahot sukriya rancho ji n klaslar ji....

Quote from: Rancho-D-Idiot on September 15, 2010, 11:56:33 AM
wah wah su vaat chhe, khoob saras lakyu chhe Dev...
just superbe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Quote from: klaskar on September 15, 2010, 01:04:48 PM
Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob likha hai aapne Devangi ji,,,!!!
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«Reply #16 on: September 16, 2010, 10:27:34 AM »
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sukriya parwaz ji....

KYa ummid rakhe usse jisne kabhi hame chaha hi nahi,
jism se jaan to nikal ni thi kyuki agar wo hamara hota to laut kar jarur aata..

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 15, 2010, 01:13:21 PM
Dev Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai kam lafzoN meiN khoob kaha hai aapne ...
Very wel poetryed.. Daad kabool kijiye

Likhate rahiye.....
Khuda hafez....... Usual Smile
          


Meri ummid ke charaag bujh gaye, Mere Zabt ki shaam dhal gayi
Teri raah dekh dekha kar, Mere jism se jaan nikal gayi... sad5

Thi ulfaateN jitni mujhse kabhi, woh sab fasaane ban gaye
Mere aik naam ke saath hi zamaane ki nazaareN badal gayi      



bahot bahot sukriya Anshumali ji aapko pasand aai hamari rachna...

Quote from: Anshumali on September 16, 2010, 12:56:58 AM
Aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko ... nazdeek tak chuute chale gaye... bahut khoob ! dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #17 on: September 16, 2010, 02:38:25 PM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on September 15, 2010, 11:02:20 AM



Kabhi mom ban ke pigal gaye,
Kabhi girtey girtey sambhal gaye,

Wo ban ke lamhaa guzer gaye,
Mere pass hi se nikal gaye,

Use rokti bhi to kiss tarah,
Ke wo shakhs itna ajeeb tha,

Kabhi tadap utha meree aah se,
Kabhi ashak se na pigal saka,

Sarey raah mila wo ager kabhi,
To nazer chhura ke guzer gaye,

Wo utar gaya meri aankho se,
Mere dil mai kyu na utar saka,

Wo chala ye sheher chhod ke,
Wo waha se phir na palat saka,

Wo sambhal gaya tha mager,
Mein bikhar ke phir na simat saki....

TERE ASHQ KYON PHIR THAHAR GAYE,
TERE DARD KYON PHIR UBHAR GAYE,

TERE LAFZO KE ISS DARD PAR,
AJI HUM TO BUSS THAHAR GAYE,

 HAI SHIKAYAT TERI SAHI MAGAR,
 MUSHKILO MEIN HUM ZARA GHIR GAYE,

 SHAKS MAIN AJEEB NAHIN HOON PER,
 HALAAT MEIN HUM ZARA BIGAD GAYE,

 ABB TAK NA SAMBHLA TUJH DOOR HOKAR ,
WAQT KE HAAT JO HUM BICHAD GAYE,

TUJHE PHIR WO WAJOOD MILJAYE GAA KAMEENEY,
GAR TUM ISKE HI PYAAR PE MARR GAYE......!
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«Reply #18 on: September 17, 2010, 11:00:08 AM »
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aachha likha lete ho kabhi kabhi.... Clapping Smiley

Zalim tha hi aesa ki daansoo ko kabhi thahar ne na diya,
jism ke to zakham bhar gaye par DIL ke zakhmo ko kabhi bharne na diya....

Quote from: kameeney on September 16, 2010, 02:38:25 PM
TERE ASHQ KYON PHIR THAHAR GAYE,
TERE DARD KYON PHIR UBHAR GAYE,

TERE LAFZO KE ISS DARD PAR,
AJI HUM TO BUSS THAHAR GAYE,

 HAI SHIKAYAT TERI SAHI MAGAR,
 MUSHKILO MEIN HUM ZARA GHIR GAYE,

 SHAKS MAIN AJEEB NAHIN HOON PER,
 HALAAT MEIN HUM ZARA BIGAD GAYE,

 ABB TAK NA SAMBHLA TUJH DOOR HOKAR ,
WAQT KE HAAT JO HUM BICHAD GAYE,

TUJHE PHIR WO WAJOOD MILJAYE GAA KAMEENEY,
GAR TUM ISKE HI PYAAR PE MARR GAYE......!
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«Reply #19 on: September 22, 2010, 09:25:55 AM »
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bahot bahot sukriya sahib ji....
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«Reply #20 on: September 22, 2010, 09:44:06 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Deevangi sis,heart touching creation,wonderful lines by Koyal sis,Parwaaz ji and Kmeeney ji.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: September 23, 2010, 10:18:11 AM »
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thanku madhu di.....
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