Kabhi Kabhi ..... ( Jasbir SIngh)

by jasbirsingh on April 08, 2010, 05:27:00 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 09, 2010, 03:23:44 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on April 08, 2010, 05:27:00 PM


KABHI KABHI HUM LIKH LIYA KARTEY HAI
HAAL-EH-DIL BAYAAN KAR LIYA KARTEY HAI
TANHAYI BHI SAATH REHTI HAI HAMAREY
TANHAYI MEH KUCH NA KUCH LIKH LIYA KARTEY HAI




JASBIR SINGH
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Good one Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #16 on: April 09, 2010, 12:26:05 PM »
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bahut accha jasbir ji
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«Reply #17 on: April 09, 2010, 07:36:50 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 09, 2010, 03:23:44 AM
Good one Jasbir Ji

Thanks Rajesh Ji

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«Reply #18 on: April 09, 2010, 07:37:13 PM »
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Quote from: rayees abdullah on April 09, 2010, 12:26:05 PM
bahut accha jasbir ji

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«Reply #19 on: April 09, 2010, 07:39:01 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 08, 2010, 07:52:23 PM
GUD JS

Thanks K.A ji

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«Reply #20 on: April 09, 2010, 07:39:36 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 08, 2010, 08:13:02 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Jasbir ji and Kapil ji.lovely creation.bahut achi lagi. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft

Thanks Madhu Ji

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«Reply #21 on: April 09, 2010, 07:40:12 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on April 08, 2010, 08:29:03 PM
Bahaut khoob Jasbir jee aur Kapil dost... Bahaut ache!

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«Reply #22 on: April 09, 2010, 07:40:46 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 08, 2010, 09:17:07 PM
nice j.s ji..

THanks Geej Ji

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«Reply #23 on: April 09, 2010, 07:41:35 PM »
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Quote from: raghu ram on April 08, 2010, 11:46:47 PM
bahuth acha hai jasbir ji

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«Reply #24 on: April 09, 2010, 07:46:01 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 08, 2010, 06:29:10 PM
Bilkul Jasbir ji... bahut hi jaldi wo subah aayegi...

hum bhi raah tak rahe hain us naye subha ki,
har taraf bas pyaar hoga jagah na hogi dard ki,
raat ayegi magar wo hogi bas kuch lamhon ki,
baadh(flood) aayegi magar wo hogi bas khushiyon ki...



Thanks Klaskar Ji ... and wah kya baat kahi hai ...


NAYI SUBAH NAYI UMEED DIL MEH JAGAYEGI
ANDHERA DOOR HOGA, ROSHNI CHAM CHMAYEGI
EH RAAT HO JAYEGI SADIYOH PURANI
NAYI UMANG KEY SAATH YEH JINDAGI FIR MUSKURAYEGI


KABHI KABHI WOH SUBAH BHI AAYEGI
HAMARI KISMAT FIR SEY GUN GUNAYEGI
KABHI KABHI WOH SUBAH BHI AAYEGI



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«Reply #25 on: April 09, 2010, 08:06:09 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Jasbir ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob llikha hai...

kabhi subah haseen to kabhi shaam rangeen hogi,
tab aur na aasuon se samundar namkeen hogi,
zindagi me har khushi ka sapna tab sach hoga,
har lamha khobsoorat aur duniya haseen hogi...
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«Reply #26 on: April 09, 2010, 09:09:55 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 09, 2010, 08:06:09 PM
Bahut bahut shukriya Jasbir ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob llikha hai...

kabhi subah haseen to kabhi shaam rangeen hogi,
tab aur na aasuon se samundar namkeen hogi,
zindagi me har khushi ka sapna tab sach hoga,
har lamha khobsoorat aur duniya haseen hogi...



Thanks Klaskar Ji and wah kya khoob kaha aap ney


KABHI KABHI HUMSEY MILNEY BHI SUBAH AAYEGI
DARPAN MEH HAMAREY WOH SAB RANG BARSAYEGI
JISKI CHAH MEH HUM ROJ BAITHA KARTEY HAI
JINDAGI BHI HAMARI SAPNEY SACH KAR JAYEGI



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«Reply #27 on: April 09, 2010, 09:12:43 PM »
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Achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap dono ne Kapil Ji aur Jasbir Ji
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Bahut bahut sukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 09, 2010, 09:12:43 PM
Achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap dono ne Kapil Ji aur Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #29 on: April 10, 2010, 12:18:35 AM »
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Bahut khoob Jasbir ji... aur bahut bahut shukriya...

us manzil ki talaash har raahi ko hai aaj,
saahil ki talash har maajhi ko hai aaj,
saat rang to hote hain indradhanush me,
khushiyon k wo rang har jeewan me ho aaj...

Quote from: jasbirsingh on April 09, 2010, 09:09:55 PM


Thanks Klaskar Ji and wah kya khoob kaha aap ney


KABHI KABHI HUMSEY MILNEY BHI SUBAH AAYEGI
DARPAN MEH HAMAREY WOH SAB RANG BARSAYEGI
JISKI CHAH MEH HUM ROJ BAITHA KARTEY HAI
JINDAGI BHI HAMARI SAPNEY SACH KAR JAYEGI



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