kabhi kabhi

by metro on September 20, 2009, 06:10:22 AM
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kabhi kabhi yaar ko bhul jana padta he,
kinara na mile to dub jana padta he,
chahta koun he apne pyaar ko marna,
kahbi kabhi pyaark khati mar jana padta he.
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2009, 06:20:41 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Metro ji,very beautiful creation,bahut acha likha aapne. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2009, 06:22:03 AM »
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thank u so much
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gunehgaar
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2009, 08:51:49 AM »
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bhul jane se bhala pyaar marta hai!
yaad rakhne se bhala koi pass ata hai!
sabhi uljhe hue hai,apne apne chahato mein,
ajkal pyaar mein jeene se to behetar marna hai...
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2009, 09:35:21 AM »
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Wah really touching n beautiful lines Gunehgaar ji.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2009, 12:37:52 PM »
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kabhi kabhi yaar ko bhul jana padta he,
kinara na mile to dub jana padta he,
chahta koun he apne pyaar ko marna,
kahbi kabhi pyaark khati mar jana padta he.

Wow simply good  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2009, 12:39:17 PM »
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bhul jane se bhala pyaar marta hai!
yaad rakhne se bhala koi pass ata hai!
sabhi uljhe hue hai,apne apne chahato mein,
ajkal pyaar mein jeene se to behetar marna hai...


Nice lines ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2009, 02:24:20 PM »
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tanks roja ji
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