KACCHI DEEWAAR HOON THOKAR NA LAGANA MUJHKO...

by pandit on May 12, 2009, 01:22:29 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 12, 2009, 06:00:04 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya pandit mahraj ji...

kea bat hai sanju sach me ahkh bhar ahye yaar so touchi hai ... bahut acha likha hai..

palke bus teri hi rah dekhti hai,
jindgi guzaro bus teri hi sansu mai,
kuch or nahi aarzo hai ab meri ,
ager mout ahey to ahey teri bahow mai

Quote from: pandit on May 12, 2009, 05:51:23 AM

OK,
NO PROBS BOSS........

YEH AAP K LIYEA.....

TERE ZID PE PESH KAR RAHA HOON YE GAJAL,
GAR AANKH BHAR AAYE TO BATANA MUJHKO.

MOHABBAT ME MAUT K KAREEB AAGAYA HOON SANAM,
EK AAKHIRI BAAR GALE SE TO LAGA-NA MUJHKO.

TU REHNA MERE AANKHO K SAAMNE USS WAQT,
AAKHIRI KHAWAHISH ME BHI TUJHE DEKHNA HAI MUJHKO,



..PANDIT..... icon_salut
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«Reply #16 on: May 12, 2009, 06:02:42 AM »
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Quote from: Sonu on May 12, 2009, 06:00:04 AM
bahut bahut shukriya pandit mahraj ji...

kea bat hai sanju sach me ahkh bhar ahye yaar so touchi hai ... bahut acha likha hai..

palke bus teri hi rah dekhti hai,
jindgi guzaro bus teri hi sansu mai,
kuch or nahi aarzo hai ab meri ,
ager mout ahey to ahey teri bahow mai


THANKS SONU...
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«Reply #17 on: May 12, 2009, 06:06:06 AM »
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your most welcome Usual Smile keep up the wonderful work

Quote from: pandit on May 12, 2009, 06:02:42 AM
THANKS SONU...
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«Reply #18 on: May 12, 2009, 06:07:00 AM »
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Saath rehte rehte yuhin waqt guzar jayega
Door hone ke baad kaun kise yaad aayega
Jee lo ye pal jab humsath hai
kal ka kya pata, waqt kahan le jayega
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«Reply #19 on: May 12, 2009, 06:23:14 AM »
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Quote from: Sonu on May 12, 2009, 06:07:00 AM
Saath rehte rehte yuhin waqt guzar jayega
Door hone ke baad kaun kise yaad aayega
Jee lo ye pal jab humsath hai
kal ka kya pata, waqt kahan le jayega

AGAIN GUD LINES SONU...

TERI TASWEER SE KARTA HOON BAATEIN,
AB USS SE HE HAI UMRA BITANA MUJHKO.

TERE KHAT ME BASI HAI JO KHUSBOO TERI,
USKI GARMI NE DE HAI HARA-RAT MUKHKO.
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«Reply #20 on: May 12, 2009, 06:31:00 AM »
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shukriya sanju ... bahut khoob bahut acha likha hia apne...

Dard ki raah hai
har taraf hai andhere koi raasta bhi nahi?
Hum ne apno se hi chot aisi khai hai
baat gairo ki hoti to dil yeh tadpta bhi nahi?
robaro baitha hai koi apna magar apna bhi nahi?
Jiski khatir hum aaye the akele yaha tak
Raaste bhar main uska koi nishan bhi nahi?
Ajnabee hai yeh shair ajnabee hai yeh log
Mera apna jo yaha chopa hai WO dikhta bhi nahi?
Hum akele chale to koi saath na tha
Teri hasrat kare ruswa mujhe
Raaz aisa hai ke chupta bhi nahi?
Itne gham sine main hum ne chupai hai Sonu
Ke ab aasoo bhi sukhe hai jo baraste bhi nahin?

Quote from: pandit on May 12, 2009, 06:23:14 AM
AGAIN GUD LINES SONU...

TERI TASWEER SE KARTA HOON BAATEIN,
AB USS SE HE HAI UMRA BITANA MUJHKO.

TERE KHAT ME BASI HAI JO KHUSBOO TERI,
USKI GARMI NE DE HAI HARA-RAT MUKHKO.
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«Reply #21 on: May 12, 2009, 06:35:00 AM »
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Quote from: Sonu on May 12, 2009, 06:31:00 AM
shukriya sanju ... bahut khoob bahut acha likha hia apne...

Dard ki raah hai
har taraf hai andhere koi raasta bhi nahi?
Hum ne apno se hi chot aisi khai hai
baat gairo ki hoti to dil yeh tadpta bhi nahi?
robaro baitha hai koi apna magar apna bhi nahi?
Jiski khatir hum aaye the akele yaha tak
Raaste bhar main uska koi nishan bhi nahi?
Ajnabee hai yeh shair ajnabee hai yeh log
Mera apna jo yaha chopa hai WO dikhta bhi nahi?
Hum akele chale to koi saath na tha
Teri hasrat kare ruswa mujhe
Raaz aisa hai ke chupta bhi nahi?
Itne gham sine main hum ne chupai hai Sonu
Ke ab aasoo bhi sukhe hai jo baraste bhi nahin?



AAPNE BHI ACCHA LIKHA HAI SONU..


U R SO FAST N FURIOUS......
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«Reply #22 on: May 12, 2009, 06:40:12 AM »
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Waah Har Nazm Bohat Pyaari Hai Pandit Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

May Allah bless You,.

Sonu Sis, Aapka To Jawaab Nahi,.
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«Reply #23 on: May 12, 2009, 06:45:56 AM »
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hahaaha ab kea karo app aram se likh rahey hu or me ahdi hoon ke ager demag chal rha hu to phat se javab deti hoon Usual Smile or ager javab na sujhe to kesi or post ka reply ker deti hoon Usual Smile

shukriya....

Quote from: pandit on May 12, 2009, 06:35:00 AM

AAPNE BHI ACCHA LIKHA HAI SONU..


U R SO FAST N FURIOUS......
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«Reply #24 on: May 12, 2009, 06:46:28 AM »
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Azeem bahi shukriya... app bhi ager kuch kalam likhte to acha lagta..

Quote from: Azeem on May 12, 2009, 06:40:12 AM
Waah Har Nazm Bohat Pyaari Hai Pandit Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

May Allah bless You,.

Sonu Sis, Aapka To Jawaab Nahi,.
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«Reply #25 on: May 12, 2009, 06:47:59 AM »
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ishq ka naam sirf suna tha aur iska ittefaq bhi hua
ishq karke jeene marne ka ittefaq hua
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«Reply #26 on: May 12, 2009, 07:57:54 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on May 12, 2009, 06:40:12 AM
Waah Har Nazm Bohat Pyaari Hai Pandit Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

May Allah bless You,.

Sonu Sis, Aapka To Jawaab Nahi,.

THANKS AJEEM BHAI...
HUME BAHUT ACCHA LAGA SUNKAR..
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«Reply #27 on: May 12, 2009, 07:58:34 PM »
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Quote from: Sonu on May 12, 2009, 06:47:59 AM
ishq ka naam sirf suna tha aur iska ittefaq bhi hua
ishq karke jeene marne ka ittefaq hua

GUD SONU..
I LIKED IT..
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«Reply #28 on: May 13, 2009, 01:22:28 AM »
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THA KABHI TERA HUMSAFAR ISS JAMANE ME,
AAJ BUS EK MUSAFIR HOON TERE HE SHEHAR ME.

BUS EK BAAR MERA DARD-E-MOHABBAT TO SUN LE,
ISS AAKHIRI SAANS KI BEMAAR DHADHKAN TO SUN LE.

AB TO KHAMOSH NA REH MERE EK SAWAAL PE BOL,
HAZAAR SAWAAL POOCHTE HAIN LOG TERE HE SHEHAR ME.


HAR OOR JASHN HAI, RAAT MUBARAK SE HAI,
Q MATAM SA CHAYA HAI TERE HE SHEHAR ME.




....PANDIT........
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«Reply #29 on: May 13, 2009, 01:50:48 AM »
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KYA KHOOOB PANDIT JI
VERY NICE
SARVESH RASTOGI
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