KACCHI DEEWAAR HOON THOKAR NA LAGANA MUJHKO...

by pandit on May 12, 2009, 01:22:29 AM
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«Reply #60 on: May 14, 2009, 09:32:08 PM »
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again gud one pooja....

Thanks Pandit ji!!!
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«Reply #61 on: May 14, 2009, 10:41:14 PM »
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Thanks Pandit ji!!!

u r most welcome pooja jee..
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Sonu
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«Reply #62 on: May 15, 2009, 03:38:18 AM »
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SANU THANKS Usual Smile

Again.
mindblowing..............
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«Reply #63 on: May 15, 2009, 03:41:38 AM »
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HAANJI PANDIT JI...  NaNaNa

BAHUT KHOOB JAVAB NAHI APKA...

Falak Ke Teer Ka Kya Nishana Tha
Idhar Mera Ghar, Udhar Uska Aaashiyana Tha
Puhunch Rahi Thi Kinare Pe Kashti-E-Umeed
Usi Waqt Is Tofaan Ko Bhi Yahaan Aana Tha
Kalam uthai hai lafs nahi milta,
Jisko dhund rahe hai wo shaks nahi milta,
Firte hai wo zamane ki talash me,
Bus hamare liye hi unhe waqt nahi milta

SONU JEE..

KACCHI DEEWAR HOON THOKAR NA LAGANA MUJHKO,
JAKHM KUCH AUR BAAKI HAIN,ABHI NA BHULANA MUJHKO.

JAKHM KITNE KHAAYE PAR AANSOO NA GIRAYA MAINE
INN JAKHMO KO HARA REHNE DE,MARHAM NA LAGANA MUJHKO.


.....PANDIT.....

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«Reply #64 on: May 15, 2009, 03:47:16 AM »
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bahut khoob sanju.. javab nahi apkaa... yeo hi likhte rahow...


KHATA KYA THE MERI JO CHAHA TUJHE DIL SE,
AB YAAD NA ANA, BHOOL PAYA HOON MUSHKIL SE.

HAR HASRAT KO TO DAFAN KAR AAYA HOON AAJ KHUD,
DAFAN HAI TERI UMMED JO SEENE ME,KAISE JAYEGE ISS DIL SE.

EK UMRA GUJAARI HAI HUMNE TUJHE BHULANE ME,
MAUT BHI SUKOON SE AAJAY, GAR PUKARLE MUJHE TU EK BAR DIL SE.


..PANDIT...


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Sonu
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«Reply #65 on: May 15, 2009, 03:47:45 AM »
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bahut khoob Celmira ji..

Yaadon Ko Dil Se Mitana Hai Mushkil,
Koshish Bohot Ki, Bhulana Hai Mushkil
Reh Gaye Hai Kahin Kisi Ek Pal Main
Un Lamhon Ko Wapis Bulana Hai Mushkil
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«Reply #66 on: May 15, 2009, 03:48:19 AM »
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bahut khoob sanju her bar ki thra bahut acha likha hia...

BHULNE K BAAD BHI WO BAHUT YAAD AAYE,
KARE HAR JATAN, DIL KAISE UNKO BHULAAYE,
AB TAK SUNA THA KYA HAI AFSAAN-E-MOHABBAT,
KHUDA AB BACHAYE, NA KOI ISSE AAZMAAYE.

...PANDIT..

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«Reply #67 on: May 15, 2009, 03:49:17 AM »
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bahut khoob Celmira ji..

Thanks Pandit, Pooja Usual Smile

Mohabbat Ke Raste Bade Hi Hain Mushkil
Jaante Hue Bhi Lagaya Tha Yeh Dil,
Hua Phir Wohi Hota Aaya Hai Jo,
Baithe Hain Le Kar Ke Toota Hua Dil !

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«Reply #68 on: May 15, 2009, 03:51:39 AM »
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bahut khoob pooja sis.. javab nahi apka

Bikhre aansu ke moti humm pi naa sake
Teri yaad mein saari raat hum so na sake
Beh na jaaye har yaad teri
Yeh sochkar hum ro na sake

kon azmaata hume, hum khud ke azmaaye hue hai
kisi main kaha thi himmat, hum khud he khud ka dil dikhaye hue hai
badi hasrato se nikla tha ek shakas, hume bhool jaana ka kah kar
hum bhoole use is kadar, ajj wo he kahta hai ki, wo humare sataye hue hai!!!



main koshish kar rahi hu ki main dard main na he likha karu.. jo likha wo bhi ek dard hai.. bas samjhne ki jaroorat hai!!

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«Reply #69 on: May 15, 2009, 03:52:56 AM »
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kea bat hai pandit ji..

Celmira ji..

Pooja ji

app sabne bahut acha likha hai yeo hi likhte rahye.. keep up the wonderful work dostoo
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«Reply #70 on: May 15, 2009, 07:37:47 AM »
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kea bat hai pandit ji..

Celmira ji..

Pooja ji

app sabne bahut acha likha hai yeo hi likhte rahye.. keep up the wonderful work dostoo

WAKAI MAAN GAYE AAPKO SONU..
ZABARDAST SHAYAR HAIN AAP....
GREAT WORK.
KEEP IT UP...
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«Reply #71 on: May 16, 2009, 06:16:22 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sanju.. jo apko humari tuti phuti shayri bhi achi lagi yea to app jese dosto ka sath hai jinko humari tuti phuti shairy achi lagti hia or humey husla afjai kerte hia Usual Smile

app bhi ager kuch likhte to acha lagta Usual Smile

WAKAI MAAN GAYE AAPKO SONU..
ZABARDAST SHAYAR HAIN AAP....
GREAT WORK.
KEEP IT UP...
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Sonu
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«Reply #72 on: May 16, 2009, 06:17:05 AM »
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Usne Kaha Tum Main Pehli Wali Baat Nahi
Maine Kaha Zindagi Main Tera Saath Nahi

Usne Kaha Ab Bhi Kisi Ke Aankhon Main Dhoob Jaati Ho ??
Maine Kaha Kisi Ke Aankhen Main Wo Gehri Baat Nahi

Usne Kaha Kiyo Itna Toot Kar Chaha Mujhey ??
Maine Kaha Insaan Hoon Pathar To Nahi

Usne Kaha Kya Main Bewafaa Hoon ??
Maine Kaha Mujhey Ab Wafa Ke Talash Nahi

Usne Kaha Bhool Jao Mujhey
Maine Kaha Tum Haqeeqat Ho Koi Khawab To Nahi …
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«Reply #73 on: May 16, 2009, 02:50:16 PM »
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Usne Kaha Tum Main Pehli Wali Baat Nahi
Maine Kaha Zindagi Main Tera Saath Nahi

Usne Kaha Ab Bhi Kisi Ke Aankhon Main Dhoob Jaati Ho ??
Maine Kaha Kisi Ke Aankhen Main Wo Gehri Baat Nahi

Usne Kaha Kiyo Itna Toot Kar Chaha Mujhey ??
Maine Kaha Insaan Hoon Pathar To Nahi

Usne Kaha Kya Main Bewafaa Hoon ??
Maine Kaha Mujhey Ab Wafa Ke Talash Nahi

Usne Kaha Bhool Jao Mujhey
Maine Kaha Tum Haqeeqat Ho Koi Khawab To Nahi …


great job sonu...
maan gaye mughle-aazam....
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«Reply #74 on: May 16, 2009, 02:57:40 PM »
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KACCHI DEWAAR HON THOKAR NA LAGANA MUJHKO,
TOOT GAYA HOON TO BIKHARNE SE BACHANA MUJHKO.

UMRA BHAR WAFA KA SILA BEWAFAI DIYA USNE,
WAFADARO KI BEWAFAI SE BACHANA MUJHKO.
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