KAHAAN HAI ..!!

by khujli on July 13, 2011, 08:29:46 AM
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                             pilaa kar ek jaam kidhar gaya tu.
                             dekar ek naam kidhar gaya tu.

                             lagta hai darr sabki nazar se mujhe.
                             kar ke badnaam kidhar gaya tu.

                             sambhala raah mei.n thaam kar haath mera .
                             dikha kar ek muqaam kidhar gaya tu.

                             thee sahill pe kashti dariya mei.n ley aaya.
                             thaa maloom anjaam kidhar gaya tu.

                             hai karti khujli intezar aaj bhi tera.
                             chaor kar oss shaam kidhar gaya tu.

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                                                               aapki apni khujli

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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2011, 08:34:48 AM »
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bahut khub khujli ji..
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2011, 09:41:00 AM »
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Quote from: GUMboy on July 13, 2011, 08:34:48 AM
bahut khub khujli ji..


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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2011, 07:58:11 PM »
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Khujli jee Aadaab!

Janab kia baat hai waah jee waaH bahut khoob kalaam
pesh ki hai aapne... Usual Smile

Ahsaas O khayal bhi umdaa rahe aur bayaani bhi Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janab...
Humari daad kabul kijiye Usual Smile         



Quote from: khujli on July 13, 2011, 08:29:46 AM

                             pilaa kar ek jaam kidhar gaya tu.
                             dekar ek naam kidhar gaya tu.

Bahut khoob Usual Smile         

                             lagta hai darr sabki nazar se mujhe.
                             kar ke badnaam kidhar gaya tu.

Masha Allah kia kahne bahut umdaa janab daad daad daad Usual Smile         

                             sambhala raah mei.n thaam mera haath.
                             dikha kar muqaam kidhar gaya tu.

Achcha hai kuch rabta kam hai dono lines meiN ?         

                             thee sahill pe kashti dariya mei.n ley aaya.
                             thaa maloom anjaam kidhar gaya tu.

Kia baat hai bahut khoob daad daad Usual Smile         

                             hai karti khujli intezar aaj bhi tera.
                             chaor kar oss shaam kidhar gaya tu.

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Janab kia kahne aapke bahut khoob Usual Smile dil se daad hazir hai... Bus aik shikayat hai ke aap itna khoob likhate hai aur aapne apna takallus bhi kalaam meiN istemaal kiya hai to bahut khoob laga.. par shayari e adab ke lihaaz se aap apna naamkaran badal lijiye... Yeh aap jaise shayari kadardaan ko shobha nahi deta...


Koi gustaqui huyi ho to muafi chahte hai.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Likhate rahiye...

Khush O aabaad rahiye..
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                                                                aapki apni khujli

                                                                PARLE G MANSION

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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2011, 06:31:55 AM »
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Quote from: GUMboy on July 13, 2011, 08:34:48 AM
bahut khub khujli ji..


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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2011, 09:29:53 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 13, 2011, 07:58:11 PM
Khujli jee Aadaab!

Janab kia baat hai waah jee waaH bahut khoob kalaam
pesh ki hai aapne... Usual Smile

Ahsaas O khayal bhi umdaa rahe aur bayaani bhi Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janab...
Humari daad kabul kijiye Usual Smile         





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Kya baat hai khujali ji...!!!
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Bhuat Khoob Khujli Ji


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Kya baat hai khujali ji...!!!


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