Kahaan ho; Kuchh patah do, to, tumhaarey paas aauun mein?

by abdbundeli on July 24, 2009, 01:38:34 PM
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Naheen maaloom hai mujhko, tumhain kaisey bulaauun mein!
Kahaan ho; Kuchh patah do, to, tumhaarey paas aauun mein?
Subah sey shaam, phir shab, nisf shab, phir shafaq; mein tanhaa:
Musalsal jaagtey khwaaboun sey kaisey dil lagaauun mein?

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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2009, 02:46:26 PM »
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kya baat hai  abd ji....

tanha shod ke tum gayi ho kahan,
tanha jee paata main nahin yahan.
subah sey shaam,fir raat,aadhi raat se subah tak,
saari raat jaagtey,tere khayallon main kaise jee paahun yahan.
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2009, 03:27:49 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 24, 2009, 02:46:26 PM
kya baat hai  abd ji....

tanha shod ke tum gayi ho kahan,
tanha jee paata main nahin yahan.
subah sey shaam,fir raat,aadhi raat se subah tak,
saari raat jaagtey,tere khayallon main kaise jee paahun yahan.

Thanks cara!

Kaisey us key binaa ab,
Miley jigar ko chain?
Doobey-sey hain hijra mein,
Lagaataar din-rain!

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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2009, 04:07:56 PM »
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nice one
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2009, 04:59:27 PM »
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Waah waah bahoot bahoot Khoob ABD ji..

Very nice lines Haresh ji.
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2009, 05:15:25 PM »
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wah wah wah, bundeli ji... wah kya baat hai... wah


jasbir singh
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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2009, 06:08:29 AM »
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Quote from: chitralsony on July 24, 2009, 04:07:56 PM
nice one
Quote from: Sophi on July 24, 2009, 04:59:27 PM
Waah waah bahoot bahoot Khoob ABD ji..

Very nice lines Haresh ji.
Quote from: jasbirsingh on July 24, 2009, 05:15:25 PM
wah wah wah, bundeli ji... wah kya baat hai... wah

jasbir singh
Thanks a lot for all your kind comments, chitralsony ji/Sophi ji/jasbir singh ji!
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2009, 06:51:08 AM »
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bade bhai bahut khoob peshkash hai yeh aapki kalam se dil se daad kabool kijiye
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2009, 06:53:21 AM »
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Very nice Abd Ji...


Puchhe kisse pata tera kaun tera thikana bataye,
tujhe dhundte hum zameen se aasmaan tak bhi jaaye,
ek baar pukaar le bas ek baar tu mera naam le,
kahin dilka gharonda yunhi khaak-e-gumnaami mein na mil jaaye
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«Reply #9 on: July 25, 2009, 01:12:28 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on July 25, 2009, 06:51:08 AM
bade bhai bahut khoob peshkash hai yeh aapki kalam se dil se daad kabool kijiye
Thanks a lot! Saahil ji, aap kaa 'barhaa bhai' likhnaa dil ko chhoo gayaa! Khush rahiye! Aabaad rahiye!
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2009, 01:25:14 PM »
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Wah Abd ji,very nice and wonderful creation, icon_thumleft Applause Applause :clap:beautiful lines by all. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2009, 01:26:25 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on July 25, 2009, 06:53:21 AM
Very nice Abd Ji...


Puchhe kisse pata tera kaun tera thikana bataye,
tujhe dhundte hum zameen se aasmaan tak bhi jaaye,
ek baar pukaar le bas ek baar tu mera naam le,
kahin dilka gharonda yunhi khaak-e-gumnaami mein na mil jaaye
Thanks a lot Angel ji!

Hoor paaindah hai dil mein jahaan hameyshah sey;
Aashiyaan hai kisee rayees meerzaadey kaa!
Khwaab hi khwaab deykhnaa bhi eik fitrat hai;
Wo yaadgaar to nahin hai kisee wa'adey kaa?

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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2009, 01:27:41 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 25, 2009, 01:25:14 PM
Wah Abd ji,very nice and wonderful creation, icon_thumleft Applause Applause :clap:beautiful lines by all. Applause Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Madhu ji!
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«Reply #13 on: July 26, 2009, 03:31:44 AM »
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Wah Bahut khoob Abd ji,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 26, 2009, 07:56:35 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 26, 2009, 03:31:44 AM
Wah Bahut khoob Abd ji,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot Madhu!
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