<>*Kahan kho gaye tum*<> -Panna 2:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

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«Reply #15 on: August 28, 2010, 10:13:48 AM »

bht pyara likha hai aapne kapil ji.......

pyaar k ehsaas ko shabdon me dhalne ki ek koshish bht badhiya rahi....

rangon me sabse rangeela hai pyaar
sitaron me sabse chamkila hai pyaar

rahe har pal wo apna saathi hai pyaar
tanhai me sath nibhayta yaar hai pyaar

andheri raaston ko jagmagata hai pyaar
har dard se ladna sikhata hai pyaar

nirbal aur asahay ki taakat hai pyaar
doobti naiyaa ki patwaar hai pyaar

kya kahun main kya hai ye pyaar
har insaan ko jo apna samjhe
wo anokha ehsaas hai pyaar....!!!!


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«Reply #16 on: August 28, 2010, 10:33:05 AM »

Bahut khoobsuurat mehfil jamai hai aap dono ne Anamika N Kapil


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«Reply #17 on: August 28, 2010, 11:01:15 AM »

shukriya sir ji....aapki tareef se dil khush ho jata hai


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«Reply #18 on: August 28, 2010, 01:42:45 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji....!!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 28, 2010, 10:33:05 AM

Bahut khoobsuurat mehfil jamai hai aap dono ne Anamika N Kapil


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«Reply #19 on: August 28, 2010, 01:44:08 PM »

Shukriya Kasak ji... aur bahut pyaara likha hai aapne pyaar ke baare me....!!!

baarish ki har boond me basaa hai pyaar,
suraj ki har kiran ko kehte hain pyaar,

dil ki dhadkan me hota hai pyaar,
ek andekha sa rishta hai pyaar,

ek khoobsurat tofha hai zindagi ka,
zindagi bhar saath nibhaata hai pyaar,

khaamoshi me kisi ki aawaaz sunai de,
band aankhon se agar koi dikhai de,

neendon me jo aaye khwaab banke,
shayad usi ehsaas ko kehte hain pyaar,

apni haar bhi agar humein jeet lage,
kisi ki baatein agar sangeet lage,

kisi ke saamne hoke agar hum gum ho jaaye,
usi madhoshi ka hi naam hai pyaar,

haan isi ko kehte hain pyaar,
mere dost isi ka naam hai pyaar....


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Noorafza

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«Reply #20 on: August 28, 2010, 03:04:49 PM »

Kasak ji, aapka kalam dil ko chu gaya! Bahut hi khoob! Aapke kalam ke reply bhi bahut achche hain, ek ek ko padh ke reply karne ka dil cha raha hai tongue3

. Lekin mujhe laga ki ek aad punctuations (viram?) hote toh aapki rachna aur bhi ahchci lagti:

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kahan kho gaye tum[,] na jane kahan kho gaye tum

hariyali ho ya suukha[,] har haal mein sath nibhayenge

thandi hawa[,] wo chandni raatein [,ya . . .] jaage the hum sath mein
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Yun hi share karte rahiye!


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«Reply #21 on: August 28, 2010, 03:10:09 PM »

Quote from: Rahi2001 on August 26, 2010, 11:32:47 AM

jara dil me to jhanko mai khoya nahi hu
kafi din ho gaye hain mai soya nahi hu

ek pal ko laga gale tu apni bahon me bhar le
aansuon ko girne de mai kabhi roya nahi hu

Kya baat hai!


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«Reply #22 on: August 28, 2010, 03:17:01 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on August 27, 2010, 09:17:53 AM

ufffffff.... kya feel hai is poem me.... ghaayal kar diya humein...

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sach hai ki meri har saans se judi thi tum,
chalta tha main magar meri manzil thi tum.

baadal tha main agar to unse barasti thi tum,
dil tha mera magar usme dhadakti thi tum,

kehta tha main magar meri aawaaz thi tum,
likhta tha main agar to meri ghazal thi tum,

dur hoon tumse main tumhaari yaadon se nahi,
dil me agar dekho mere to aaj bhi ho tum...

Kasak ji, meri dil se dua hai ki agar aapne yeh kilam kisi ke liye likha hoga, toh uska bhi jawaab Klaskar ji ke reply jaisa hao. Aur aap dono ne kamaal kar diya! Pyar ko bahut hi khoobi se darshaya hai aap dono ne! Pya ke liye jitna kahe kam padhta hai tongue3


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«Reply #23 on: August 28, 2010, 06:00:31 PM »

shukriya noorafza ji k aapne itni pasand ki meri ye koshish
aur aapne jo punctautionmki baat ki hai agli bar main dhayn rakhungi iss baat ka...thnx ji pointout karne k liye....


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«Reply #24 on: August 28, 2010, 06:11:26 PM »

bahut khoob kapil ji bahut achha likha aur ehsaason ki khushboo liye hai ye kavita.

Quote from: klaskar on August 28, 2010, 02:50:16 AM

thank you hai ji.... aapne bhi bahut pyaara likha hai...!!!

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andheron me jo chiraag ban jalta rahe,
toofaan me jo deewar ban khada rahe,

raaton ko jo khwaab ban aankhon me ho,
aur jo ek khushboo ban saanson me ho,

maikhaane pe kuch mai se besudh rehte hain,
wo to sirf mai ko hi mohabbat kehte hain,

aankhon me chehra kisi ka har lamha rahe,
bin kahe aankhon se jo sab baatein kahe,

maangi hui har duwa jab poori lage,
bin sanam duniya agar adhuri lage,

jaan se badhke agar koi lagne lage,
shayad usi ehsaas ko pyaar kehte hain...


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«Reply #25 on: August 28, 2010, 06:34:05 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Noorafza ji...!!!

Quote from: Noorafza on August 28, 2010, 03:17:01 PM


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«Reply #26 on: August 28, 2010, 06:35:28 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji.... waise kahaan vyast hain aajkal aap... dikhaayi hi nahi dete....!!!

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 28, 2010, 06:11:26 PM

bahut khoob kapil ji bahut achha likha aur ehsaason ki khushboo liye hai ye kavita.


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