<>*Kahin durr chali jaun main*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 27, 2011, 12:52:39 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 28, 2011, 05:09:12 AM »
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khwaish ji bht khubbbbbbbbbbbb....aapka jawab ji......

Zindagi hi sawaal bankar reh gai hamari
Isily isse hum sawaal bharpur karte hain

Nahin chal sakte jinke humkadam banke
Unki raah se hum khudko dur karte hain

Ye safar zindagi ka kuch hi lamhon ka hai
Dur rehne ko ye hume majbur karte hain

Pyaar k rishte hi zindagi ko sahi mane denge
Yehi jeewan me mere itna noor karte hain…!!!



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«Reply #16 on: July 28, 2011, 07:49:15 AM »
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Bahut wadiya khwaish ji..

Tuada Tehhh Dil To Shukarguzaar Haan Geet Ji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #17 on: July 28, 2011, 09:14:58 AM »
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Dil mai Kasak jagaati ek mast poem....Anamika ji
Kisi k dil mai umang jagaana aur apni jagah banaana tou koi aapse seekhe
Ess kala main tou aap paarangat hain....koi saani nahi hai aapka....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bhatak liya hai tumne ess jahaan main
Ab aur na Gali-kuchon ki khak chhanne dunga

Saayaa ban saath-saath chalungaa tumhaare
Thaam lunga hath,rok lunga kadam tumhaare

Agar kahin durr jaane ka khyaal bhi aaya
Har raah ko mein moudd dunga meri he oor


<>*Kahin durr chali jaun main*<>

kya karun gar khudko hi na sambhal paun main
dar lagta hai khudki nazarse hi na gir jaun main....

thhamkar hath uska yahan tak to aa hi gai hun
kaash uss chaand tak ab to pahunch jaun main...

bhatakti rahi hun har gali har dariche pe main
jii karta hai aaj is chauraahe pe hi ruk jaun main...

na manzil ho meri na kahin jane ka rasta hi rahe
har ek kadam me sirf teri taraf hi badhti jaun main...

thaam lena hath aur rok lena kadam mere ae jaan
jo tujhse bichhadkar kahin durr chali jaun main...!!!

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«Reply #18 on: July 28, 2011, 09:39:22 AM »
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heyyyy humnaaammmmmm......thnx re.....
bht pyara likha hai tumne...very sweet feelings ....
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«Reply #19 on: July 30, 2011, 05:44:31 AM »
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apki poetry to bas kmaal he anamika ji.....har poetry me alag baat he..........iske reply me kuch lines yaad rahi he umiid he apko pasand ayega....
specially ye line ke liye
"na manzil ho meri na kahin jane ka rasta hi rahe
har ek kadam me sirf teri taraf hi badhti jaun main...

thaam lena hath aur rok lena kadam mere ae jaan
jo tujhse bichhadkar kahin durr chali jaun main...!!!"

kal chodawi ki raat thi shab par raha charcha tera
kuch ne kaha ye chand he kuch ne kaha chehra tera....
guche ko tere chodkar jogi hi ban jaye magar......
jungale tere... parbat tere......basti terei.sahra tera.....

bahot aacha likha he anamika ji.just lovable.....
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«Reply #20 on: July 30, 2011, 05:47:57 AM »
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ufffffffff mastam mast reply ji...i love those lines ....

waise bhi aapka yahan aana hi mere liye bestest gift hai.....

u made my day rajaji.....likhna safal hua......

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