kaia tum bhee mujh ko sochtay ho

by anokhiladli on August 17, 2009, 09:06:11 PM
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hello friends
this is my first post here,but it is not my first effort, hope u like it,
                   main door to tum say rehti hon
                   per atay  jatay  saroon  say
                   tumhara   pochti   rehti hoon
                   or yuon hi tum say milti hoon
                   kis hal main din main rehtay ho
                   sooraj aa  ker   batata  hay
                   ab kis  kay  sapnay  dikhtay ho
                   chand  bata  ker  jata   hay
                   jo  khusboo   tum   lagatay  ho
                   hawa kay  sang   to atti   hay
                   tumhari  sari  batoon   ko
                   barish    chore  kay  jati hay
                   or yoon tum say milna hota hay
                   or main bhee jiti  rehti  hon
                   aik  bat  bata  do tum  jana
                   kaia tum bhee mujh ko sochtay ho
                   or yuon hi muj ko dhondtay ho
                               
               
 
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2009, 10:24:58 PM »
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Quote from: anokhiladli on August 17, 2009, 09:06:11 PM
hello friends
this is my first post here,but it is not my first effort, hope u like it,
                   main door to tum say rehti hon
                   per atay  jatay  saroon  say
                   tumhara   pochti   rehti hoon
                   or yuon hi tum say milti hoon
                   kis hal main din main rehtay ho
                   sooraj aa  ker   batata  hay
                   ab kis  kay  sapnay  dikhtay ho
                   chand  bata  ker  jata   hay
                   jo  khusboo   tum   lagatay  ho
                   hawa kay  sang   to atti   hay
                   tumhari  sari  batoon   ko
                   barish    chore  kay  jati hay
                   or yoon tum say milna hota hay
                   or main bhee jiti  rehti  hon
                   aik  bat  bata  do tum  jana
                   kaia tum bhee mujh ko sochtay ho
                   or yuon hi muj ko dhondtay ho
                               
               
 

 occasion14 good effort
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2009, 02:16:09 AM »
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nice lines anokhiladli!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2009, 02:23:53 AM »
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Bahut khoob Anokh ji,beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2009, 02:47:17 AM »
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Nice Lines and Welcome to Yoindia Usual Smile
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