~~~~~~ Kaise Guzarate hai Tanha Din ~~~~~~~~~~

by BeNam on September 21, 2005, 08:32:23 PM
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Kaise guzarate hai Tanaha din mere, kaise tumhe bataun,
Bin tere kaise jee raha hun, kaise tumhe samajhaun,
Yade na hoti tumhari, na banati jo yeh sahara,
Majnu sa haal hota, sahera main dhudhata main kinara.

--- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2005, 10:14:16 PM »
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Good one!!!

her din her shaam, Kyun dil udaas hota hai
pal pal kissi ko soch ker kyun yeh ehsaas hota hai
chota sa yeh dil hai, aasha hai dil ki choti si
kaash wo houn hamare paas, pal pal unki judai ka dard hota hai!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2005, 02:33:00 PM »
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--- Kya baat hai Poojaji! Bahot achhe------

Hashra yeh hua hai teri judai main,
Tera naam hi leta hun her duhai main,
Tujhe dekhe ek zamana bit gaya,
Gamon se jaise nata jud sa gaya!

Her waqt dil bharata hai ek aah,
Kya karun ke sujhati nahi teri raah,
Na umid ho raha hun zindagi se mere,
Jahannum ban gayi Jannat, bin tere!


--- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!

Aaj tumhe apana naam batata hun --
-- Mera naam Dhruv Hai --
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2005, 03:35:59 PM »
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wowwwww benaam ji and pooja kuddiye!! keep it up...kafi posts me ap dono ki shayari-conversation dekhi aur maza aya padne me!  :D
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2005, 08:01:33 PM »
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-------- Thanks Meenaji ---------------
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2005, 08:23:40 PM »
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Tusi vi kamal kitta Meena ji, Bina likhy kaise chal diye!! kuch yahan bhi likh kar jaaty to acha lgata!!!


Ashiyana mera ashaq mai bahne laga
mai jiti rahi aor aks mera marne laga
julam uss per duniyan ka, tere naam ke taane kasane laga
chale bhi aao ki ab, maut ka nagma sajane laga!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 22, 2005, 08:32:52 PM »
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too gud Benam ji n Pooja sis...........
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2005, 08:34:24 PM »
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shukariyan nikki!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2005, 03:34:17 AM »
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----Bahot achhe Pooja ----
Thanks Nikki

Tere pyaar ka sahara na raha,
Duniya main koi ab hamara na raha,
Dekh ke hamara haal duniya hasti hai,
Unhe kyaa pata is kashti ka koi kinara na raha!


--- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2005, 01:56:46 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob!!!
"Unhe kyaa pata is kashti ka koi kinara na raha!  "" bahoot hi achi lagi apki yah line.

Judai -e-dard bayan kare to kare kaise
Jitna bhi saha behad laga, jitna bhi kaha bahoot kam laga!!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2005, 04:28:50 PM »
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hmm nice pooja and benam... chalo pooja tumari bhi shikayat dood kar deti hoon:  :D


judai ka alam kya hai, aab kaise kahe kisi ko,
har pal marne ka guman hota hai,
yuh to rukhi nahin zindagi, chali ja rhai hai,
par yeh dil hi judai me bejaan hota hai!
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«Reply #11 on: September 23, 2005, 04:35:53 PM »
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wah kaya baat likhi hai Meena bahoot khoob!!

yuh to rukhi nahin zindagi, chali ja rhai hai,
par yeh dil hi judai me bejaan hota hai!!!
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Sochati hu, ki, ab na sochugu tujko
na sochane ki, soch mai bhi, Tu shamil hai!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2005, 04:36:47 PM »
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shukriya kuddiye!  :D
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«Reply #13 on: September 30, 2005, 12:47:27 PM »
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---

BENAM tere bina tanaha chala jayega,
Aaj ke baad fir kabhi na laut ke ayega,

Socha tha Game ulfat main manayenge tujhe,
per ab yeh haal hai ke dil se na bulayenge tujhe!

Chahe sitam dhaiye lakh duniya,
kar de badnam BENAM ko Duniya,
Dilse tera pyaar na jayega,
Benam tujhe ab kabhi bhul na payega!

--- BENAM ----
BENAM jita raha tha zindagi, Sakun tha dil ko mere,
Naam se jo kar li bandagi,  khali hath laut hun der se tere!
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«Reply #14 on: September 30, 2005, 03:05:25 PM »
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wowow Nice to see your Post BeNam!!!

apko bhulane mai shayd umar gujar jayegi
apko yakin dilaane mai, umar beet jayegi
chalati sanse, her waqat yaad apki dilayegi
jab na rahegi yah saanse, tab bhi tumhara nishan chor jayegi!!!
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