kaise ham jindagi se guftagu kar rahe the ~~~~Raahi~~~~~

by Rahi2001 on January 19, 2011, 06:44:07 AM
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ek raah pe naya safar shuru kar rahe the
kisi gair se jindagi ko rubaru kar rahe the

kaise ham batayen dastan-e-jindagi unko
kaise ham jindagi se guftgu kar rahe the

bada bechain hai dil mera aaj khokar ek sathi
talash fir uski ki ham shuru kar rahe the
kaise ham jindagi.........................

kabhi dagmagaye the kadam to sambhala usne
aaj ham akele chalne ki justju kar rahe the
kaise ham jindagi.....................

andhere me to apna saya bhi sath nahi hota
ham use pani ki koshish fir se hubahu kar rahe the
kaise ham jindagi......................

"khatm kardo jina e-jine walon ,
nahi baaki koi ab jindagi ka nishan hoga"
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2011, 09:22:57 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2011, 10:04:34 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2011, 02:51:01 PM »
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Quote from: Rahi2001 on January 19, 2011, 06:44:07 AM
ek raah pe naya safar shuru kar rahe the
kisi gair se jindagi ko rubaru kar rahe the

kaise ham batayen dastan-e-jindagi unko
kaise ham jindagi se guftgu kar rahe the

bada bechain hai dil mera aaj khokar ek sathi
talash fir uski ki ham shuru kar rahe the
kaise ham jindagi.........................

kabhi dagmagaye the kadam to sambhala usne
aaj ham akele chalne ki justju kar rahe the
kaise ham jindagi.....................

andhere me to apna saya bhi sath nahi hota
ham use pani ki koshish fir se hubahu kar rahe the
kaise ham jindagi......................

"khatm kardo jina e-jine walon ,
nahi baaki koi ab jindagi ka nishan hoga"

Very Nice Poetry ... Rahi Ji !

Good Expression .... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... !

aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 06:31:31 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on January 19, 2011, 02:51:01 PM
Very Nice Poetry ... Rahi Ji !

Good Expression .... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... !

aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 19, 2011, 10:04:34 AM
Oyeee Birthday-boy....aaj tou aayiish kar kyu sad sad ho raha hai.... DOH DOH DOH......Pagal....

Dukh ki kavita tou saare saal likhni he hai....
Aaj tou kuchh mast-mast likh reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.... icon_flower
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thanx for all of u

and koyal di ek din kuch acha likhne se jindagi ki haqiqat nahi badal jati hai

mai jo hu wo hi rahunga "Raahi" the king of way

but asal me mai hu Raahi the king of pain


aur di ab jitne dard hai wo kabhi khatam nahi ho sakty na hi hongy aur na hi mai hony dunga

kyonki ye dard mere sache dost hai mai kahin b rahu kaise b rahu ye sath nahi chhodty
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2011, 06:46:25 AM »
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veri nice rahi ji bhout achi poetry hain
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2011, 06:53:39 AM »
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veri nice rahi ji bhout achi poetry hain
thanx saahil ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2011, 07:13:42 AM »
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ek raah pe naya safar shuru kar rahe the
kisi gair se jindagi ko rubaru kar rahe the

kaise ham batayen dastan-e-jindagi unko
kaise ham jindagi se guftgu kar rahe the

bada bechain hai dil mera aaj khokar ek sathi
talash fir uski ki ham shuru kar rahe the
kaise ham jindagi.........................

kabhi dagmagaye the kadam to sambhala usne
aaj ham akele chalne ki justju kar rahe the
kaise ham jindagi.....................

andhere me to apna saya bhi sath nahi hota
ham use pani ki koshish fir se hubahu kar rahe the
kaise ham jindagi......................

"khatm kardo jina e-jine walon ,
nahi baaki koi ab jindagi ka nishan hoga"

Bahut Bahut Khoob Raahiji..

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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2011, 07:17:00 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Raahiji..

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aap ko miss karta hu apni kavitaon me
ab to khwaish hai meri ke aap ko likh dalon
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bahut khub rahiji....

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khush rahie....
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Rahi ji...
buht achi kavita likhte ho ap vry nyc ji
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