kaisi bebasi hai samir "dilse"

by Samir Dil Se on April 07, 2013, 08:36:38 PM
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chhupa bhi nahi sakte, bata  bhi nahi sakte
kaisi bebasi hai hum use bhula bhi nahi sakte


pal-pal satati hain uski yaadein hume
in yaadon ko dil se mita bhi nahi sakte


zakhm khaye hain jo is raah-e-ishq me humne
woh zakhm hum kisi ko dikha bhi nahi sakte


tadapte hain har lamha dard-e-judai me
bhejker paigam usko bula bhi nahi sakte


ro padegi sun kar yeh kaynat bhi samir
us gam-e-dastan ko suna bhi nahi sakte.





samir "dilse"
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2013, 01:26:17 AM »
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Bahut badhiya samir jee
aapko padha hai pahle..
laajavaab ghazal..
itni saadgi se aap sher kah dete hai ki maza aa jata hai padhkar..
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2013, 01:31:12 AM »
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chhupa bhi nahi sakte, bata  bhi nahi sakte
kaisi bebasi hai hum use bhula bhi nahi sakte


pal-pal satati hain uski yaadein hume
in yaadon ko dil se mita bhi nahi sakte


zakhm khaye hain jo is raah-e-ishq me humne
woh zakhm hum kisi ko dikha bhi nahi sakte


tadapte hain har lamha dard-e-judai me
bhejker paigam usko bula bhi nahi sakte


ro padegi sun kar yeh kaynat bhi samir
us gam-e-dastan ko suna bhi nahi sakte.





samir "dilse"


verii gud
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2013, 01:38:29 AM »
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Bahut badhiya samir jee
aapko padha hai pahle..
laajavaab ghazal..
itni saadgi se aap sher kah dete hai ki maza aa jata hai padhkar..

bahot bahot shukriya mkv ji ...
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2013, 01:39:24 AM »
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verii gud
thanks
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2013, 12:18:40 PM »
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waah waah dheron daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2013, 01:53:04 PM »
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waah waah waah Samir Jee ...bahut bahut khoob...dheron daad.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2013, 03:05:44 PM »
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waah waah dheron daad aur mubarakbaad
bahot bahot shukriya sk ji  .
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2013, 03:06:44 PM »
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waah waah waah Samir Jee ...bahut bahut khoob...dheron daad.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanks a lot.
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2013, 01:39:59 AM »
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chhupa bhi nahi sakte, bata  bhi nahi sakte
kaisi bebasi hai hum use bhula bhi nahi sakte

pal-pal satati hain uski yaadein hume
in yaadon ko dil se mita bhi nahi sakte

zakhm khaye hain jo is raah-e-ishq me humne
woh zakhm hum kisi ko dikha bhi nahi sakte

tadapte hain har lamha dard-e-judai me
bhejker paigam usko bula bhi nahi sakte

ro padegi sun kar yeh kaynat bhi samir
us gam-e-dastan ko suna bhi nahi sakte.


samir "dilse"


wah wah aapka likha padkar bahut accha laga samir ji. bahut c daad.
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«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2013, 01:46:49 AM »
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wah wah aapka likha padkar bahut accha laga samir ji. bahut c daad.

Dilse shukriya apka...
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