Kasak Adhure Pyaar Ki......Koyal

by KOYAL46 on October 28, 2010, 10:47:17 AM
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Kasak Adhure Pyaar Ki......

Lo Aaj tumse apne pyaar ka afsaana keh rahe hain hum
Izhaar apne dard ka kar ke tamaasha ban rahe hain hum

Baant-ta nahi dard koi bhi kisi ka yahaan jaante hain hum
Phir bhee naahak he aansu bahaye chale ja rahe hain hum

Jo bhee hua he usse kismat ka likha maan lete hain  hum
Jo bhee mila hai usi me khushi apni jaan lete hain ab hum

Beetee huyee baat ko ab bhula-beesra lete hain hum
Phir se ek baar zindagi ka haath thaam lete hain hum

Jo pyaar karta mujhe rote huye kyu dekhe sochte hain hum
Hasne hasaane ke wade jo kiye they yaad kar lete hain hum

Kab hoti hain khwaishen poori kisi ki bhee jaante hain hum
Kasak apne adhure pyaar ki kyu kisi ko batla dete hain hum

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«Reply #1 on: October 28, 2010, 11:19:10 AM »
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babut badhiya likha he koyaliya jii...achhi peshkash..ke liye dher saaari daad~

kisi ke rukh ko chori chori taakte rahe
kya jante the paththar ko pyar ham bant-te rahe...
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«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2010, 11:48:49 AM »
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Daad k liye dhanaywaad ABHI... icon_flower
Your two lines are very meaningful.....

Anjaane me ABHI tum ye kya karte rahe
Pathar ki murat ko zinda jaante rahe..... Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle

babut badhiya likha he koyaliya jii...achhi peshkash..ke liye dher saaari daad~

kisi ke rukh ko chori chori taakte rahe
kya jante the paththar ko pyar ham bant-te rahe...



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«Reply #3 on: October 28, 2010, 11:57:32 AM »
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Daad k liye dhanaywaad ABHI... icon_flower
Your two lines are very meaningful.....

apka bhi dhanyawad jii ...
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2010, 12:12:06 PM »
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ok ji.......
apka bhi dhanyawad jii ...
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2010, 12:39:17 PM »
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su vaat chhe baku, aatalu saras lakhata pan aavade chhe tane...??

kharekhar ek dam mast mast lakhyu chhe.... aavi ne aavi rite lakhati raheje ho....ne....Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2010, 12:50:07 PM »
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Tare jeva daad denaar male tou choukas lakhish....Aabhaar
Idiot ji.....

su vaat chhe baku, aatalu saras lakhata pan aavade chhe tane...??

kharekhar ek dam mast mast lakhyu chhe.... aavi ne aavi rite lakhati raheje ho....ne....Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 28, 2010, 03:13:35 PM »
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waah koyal bahut hi khoob likha hai.....bahut pyara..... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: October 28, 2010, 03:15:18 PM »
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Bahut pyara likha hai koyal..
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2010, 08:33:34 AM »
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gudduuuuuuuu.......... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
mastam mast likha hai tumne........bht hi jhakaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas......

maza aagaya ye padhke aaj...tumhare dono post aaj k zabardast hain yaar....time nahin hai kal iska reply dungi.......
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2010, 08:41:48 AM »
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waah kya baat hai Koyal.. ek dum mast likha hai.. yunhi likhte raho.. bahut achcha likh rahe ho...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


ghum bhulaane ke bahaane se hi gum ko yaad karte hain hum,
kisi ko batake hi apne dil ka dard mita lete hain hum,

chaahte hain kisiko is qadar ki uski judaai seh nahi paate,
uski jadai ke kisse hi apne doston ko sunaate hain hum,

sochte hain ki shayad koi ho jo samjhe hamaari baat ko,
saahnubhuti ki talaash me hi apne dil ka haal batate hain hum,

par kaun yahaan hota hai kisi ka apna ki sunle aapki baat,
na paake koi sujhaaw fir khud ko hi fir koste hain hum,

kuch hote hain apne jo samajhte hain humko humse zyaada,
hum apna dard unhe bataake ki apne dard ko kam kar lete hain hum...
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2010, 09:35:54 AM »
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Thanks a lot Nikhaar-di..... icon_flower

Kyu ab tum itni chup-chup rehti ho
Apne shabdon ko kya khud he padhti ho

Kyu nahi humko bhi padhne ka mauka deti ho
Aaj-kal kahaan par khoyee-khoyee si rehti ho

waah koyal bahut hi khoob likha hai.....bahut pyara..... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2010, 11:03:17 AM »
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Thanks a lot Geet-di...Seekhya tou aap he ne hai..... icon_flower

Bahut pyara likha hai koyal..
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«Reply #13 on: October 29, 2010, 11:09:22 AM »
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Waah Waah!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob Koyalji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: October 29, 2010, 11:18:22 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    KOYAL JI....


"KASAK ADHURE PYAAR KI"
YAAD DILAYE ROZ YAAR KI....
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