KASH KI AAJ DIL NA DUKHE.................Anahita

by Anahita on June 18, 2012, 06:08:14 AM
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Kash Ki Aaj Dil Na Dukhe Aur Na Main Unka Naam Loon.
       Apni Besabab Dhadkanon Ko Khud Hi Thaam Loon.
Unke Laut Aane Ki Ummeed Ke Dum Se Thi Zindagi Meri,
       Ab Is Tooti Ummeed ka Daaman Chhod Kar Maut Ka Hath Tham Loon.....!
    
       
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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2012, 06:12:42 AM »
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kabhee kabhee badee baat kah detee ho betee dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2012, 06:14:46 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 18, 2012, 06:12:42 AM
kabhee kabhee badee baat kah detee ho betee dheron daad aur ek rau
SHUKRIYA SIR  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2012, 06:41:59 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

Too sad though! Thoda positive likhiye na....
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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2012, 06:51:26 AM »
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Kya baat hai anahita jee bohut khoob , but last 2 lines bohut hi negative hain Ye meri niji rai hai, baqi aap zyada behtar janti hain k aapne kis contex main likha hai..   
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2012, 09:46:18 AM »
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Bhut khoob bahna....
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2012, 10:05:40 AM »
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Aap ke sher ka jawab dene ki koshish ki hai..umeed hai aap bura nahi manegi...is mein thoda positive aspect add kiya hai...

Suna Hai Mohabbat Ki Na-Kaamyabi Se Bohat Dard Hota Hai,
Jise Chaho Beshumar Uske Kho Ja Ne Se Behad Dard Hota Hai,
Palat Kar Jo Na Dekhe Phir, Use Aashiq Nahi De-Dard Kehte Hai,
Bhul Kar Sab Nayi Zindagi Sajao, Waqt Sab Ka Humdard Hota Hai..!!
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bahut khub. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2012, 04:56:56 PM »
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Bahut khoob Anahita jee
Sher bahut accha hai.
par maut kee baat..Sochna bhee theek nahee..Aise nirmohee se naata todna sahee hai..
Par jis khuda ne jindgee dee hai uske prati jabaabdehee bhi jaroori hai.
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2012, 07:36:24 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Anahita ji....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 19, 2012, 01:44:44 PM »
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Quote from: Anahita on June 18, 2012, 06:08:14 AM

Kash Ki Aaj Dil Na Dukhe Aur Na Main Unka Naam Loon.
       Apni Besabab Dhadkanon Ko Khud Hi Thaam Loon.
Unke Laut Aane Ki Ummeed Ke Dum Se Thi Zindagi Meri,
       Ab Is Tooti Ummeed ka Daaman Chhod Kar Maut Ka Hath Tham Loon.....!
     
       

Andaaz-e-Bayaan Bahut Khoobsurat Hai Par Sirf Umeed Ke toothne Par Maut Ka Haath Thaam Lena Buzdilli Hai..

Insaan To Waheen Hai Jo Har Ek Cheez Ka Saamna Kare Aur jee Kar Bataye..
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