Kaun hoon mein?

by ishu_singh10 on June 20, 2010, 11:53:14 AM
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koi tumse pooche kaun hoon main,
keh dena koi khaas nahin,

ek dost hai kachha pakka sa,
ek jhoot hai aadha saccha sa,
jazbaat ko dhake ek parda bas,
ek bahana h accha accha sa...

jeevan ka ek aisa saathi hai,
jo paas ho kar bhi paas nahin,
koi tumse pooche kaun hoon main,
keh dena koi khaas nahin...

hawa ka ek suhana jhoka hai,
kabhi nazuk to kabhi toofan sa,
shakl dekh kar jo nazrein jhuka le,
kabhi apna to kabhi begana sa...

zindagi ka ek aisa humsafar,
jo samandar h, par dil ki pyaas nahin,
koi tumse pooche kaun hoon main,
keh dena koi khaas nahin...

ek saathi jo ankahin kuch batein keh jaata hai,
yadon me jiska ek dhundla chehra reh jaata h,
yun toh uske na hone ka kuch gum nahin,
par kabhi kabhi ankhon se ansu ban ke beh jaata hai...

yun rehta toh mere tasavvur me hi,
par in ankhon ko uski talash nahin,
koi tumse pooche kaun hoon main,
keh dena koi khaas nahin...
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2010, 03:45:54 PM »
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ISHU JI AAP KI YE TAKHLEEQ MAI PAHLE BHI KAHEEN PADH CHUKI HOON .AGAR LIKHNE WALE KA NAAM BHI SAATH ME DETE TO BEHTAR HOTA.THANKS 4 NICE SHARING...........
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2010, 03:49:13 PM »
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Good one Ishu Ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2010, 08:25:03 PM »
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Main bhi Mamta ji ki baat se sehmat hoon... mujhe bhi aisa lag raha tha kahin padh rakha hai maine ye poem... bahut pyaari kavita hai... thanx for sharing again...!!!

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http://kuchhankahisi.blogspot.com/2009/01/koun-hu-mai.html

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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2010, 10:31:16 PM »
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thanks kapilji!
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