Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan……KOYAL:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

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Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan………….

Pyaasi-Pyaasi kaisi shaam aayee hai
Dil mai ek hoouk si ouugg aayee hai

Naa mein soti hoon naa jaagti hoon
Ajeeb si badhoshi mai sulagti hoon

Jahaan mai mere sawaal kayi uljhe hain
Jinke uttar mujhe kabhi nahi sujhe hain

Sajan tum bin kaun samjhe meri Ghutan
Tum ho udhar mein hu idhar dono bechain

Aaa jaao mere sanam aur lagjao gale se
Mujhe bachaalo tum ess tanhaayee se

Aaj Hum shabdoko kagaz par sajjate hain
Tanhaayee me unhein he gungunaate hain


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Re: Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan……KOYAL

«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2011, 06:34:31 AM »

mastam creation gudiya rani....meri feelings jaise tumnelikh daali....
bht mast lagi mujhe ye post tumhari....mmuuaahhh


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Re: Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan……KOYAL

«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2011, 07:10:57 AM »

Aabhaar Anu-di..... icon_flower

Jaane kaise jud gayi hain tujhse dil ki ye kadiyen
Tera har soch sajta hai ban meri kavita ki ladiyen

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 06, 2011, 06:34:31 AM

mastam creation gudiya rani....meri feelings jaise tumnelikh daali....
bht mast lagi mujhe ye post tumhari....mmuuaahhh


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Re: Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan……KOYAL

«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2011, 09:44:16 AM »

Bahaut khoob di..
bilkul dil se nikla hua maloom hota hai..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan……KOYAL

«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2011, 09:49:32 AM »

hunnnn koyalji..

bahu badhiya hai..

achchha likha hai sach...


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Re: Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan……KOYAL

«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2011, 10:30:47 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 06, 2011, 06:20:56 AM

Bahut acha likha hai sweetu beech mein ek do ashaar ki rhythm nhi baithi otherwise bahut acha likha hai....


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Re: Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan……KOYAL

«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2011, 10:38:46 AM »

Thanks a lot Rahim-bhai....aap se hamesha mujhe encouragement milta hai... icon_flower

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 06, 2011, 09:44:16 AM

Bahaut khoob di..
bilkul dil se nikla hua maloom hota hai..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan……KOYAL

«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2011, 11:12:24 AM »

bahut achha hai koyaliya rani..

ekdam mast..

dher saari daad..

baki kabhi onlinme milna fir batat hun~


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Re: Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan……KOYAL

«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2011, 06:17:42 PM »

wah bahut khub ji.
aapki bechaini aur ghutan dil ko chu gai.
daad haazir hai ji.
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Re: Kaun Samjhe Meri Ghutan……KOYAL

«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2011, 10:36:56 AM »

Thanks Manjum ji.... icon_flower

Quote from: manjum on January 06, 2011, 09:49:32 AM

hunnnn koyalji..

bahu badhiya hai..

achchha likha hai sach...


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