Khaak ho jaaney sey dartey ho, to, aatey kyoun ho?

by abdbundeli on April 11, 2009, 02:32:57 AM
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Aatish-e-reig hoon, abroun sey daraatey kyoun ho?
Khaak ho jaaney sey dartey ho, to, aatey kyoun ho?
Baarhaa neend tootatee hai, jigar jaltaa hai;
Baarhaa khwaab mein aa-aa key sataatey kyoun ho?

                                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2009, 02:46:47 AM »
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Nice lines bundeli jee.....
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2009, 02:52:56 AM »
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Good one Abd Ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 06:09:42 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 11, 2009, 02:46:47 AM
Nice lines bundeli jee.....

Thanks pandit ji!
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2009, 06:11:02 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 11, 2009, 02:52:56 AM
Good one Abd Ji

Thanks Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2009, 07:14:27 AM »
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Na badlegi fitrat, na badlegi aadat

Yeh jante to ABD, to GHAYEL ko samjhate q ho


Na unhone na bulaya, na tumhe koi kam

Tum unki gali me, aate jaate q ho


Jo hasate nahi kabhi, na haste hain sath mere

Un dosto se poocho, mujhko rulate q ho

-SG-
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2009, 07:57:33 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 11, 2009, 07:14:27 AM
Na badlegi fitrat, na badlegi aadat

Yeh jante to ABD, to GHAYEL ko samjhate q ho


Na unhone na bulaya, na tumhe koi kam

Tum unki gali me, aate jaate q ho


Jo hasate nahi kabhi, na haste hain sath mere

Un dosto se poocho, mujhko rulate q ho

-SG-

Unhain bulaatey thak gaye,
Un ney sunee na eik!
Wah, kiskee kyaa suneygaa,
Jis key meet aneik!!

Wo aayengey, jaayengey;
Koun sakaa hai rok?
Un key liye samaan hain,
Aganit shok-ashok!

Kharhee huyee hai beech mein,
Eik sudrudhh deewaar!
Rah jaataa ho usee kaa:
Jo jaataa us paar!!

          Ramwatiya/abd bundeli
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