khamoshiya.n

Bahut pyari sharing hai Medha ji,

But plz use Not Mine when u share others work,

Shally.

Shally ji its mine kisi or ki nahi hai mene likhi hai ,apne sidha ese kese bol diya ki plz use not mine whn u share other work,me janti hu ye bat,meri aadat me shumar nahi hai ye cheej ki me kisi or ki writing ko mere label ke sath aap logo ke beech share karu.

Medha jain

Medha,

Bahut khoob !

Aap bura nahi maan.na Shally ne jo kaha...Aapki poetry itni achi hai aur aap yoon he likhte rahiye...yahi toh umda shayara ki khoobi hoti hai

@Shally
Medha is a new member introduced to Yoindia by Mann(Vicky). And she is an original poetess. She has written on other forums before.
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Rajbir ji shukriya ki aapko meri koshish pasand aayi,or mene kuchh bura nahi mana shally ji ki bat ka.But main khud likhati hu to janti hu ki likhane ke liye kitni mehanat ki jati hai,kitne zazbato.n me utarna padta hai,chahe achha likha jaye ya bura use padhana or use lkhte waqt lekhak ki kya paristhiti ya vichar rahe honge unhe samjh kar kisi bhi rachna par comment karna hota hai or jab itni mehnat ke bad koi use ye bat bole ki agar ye aapka nahi hai to plz NOT MINE likhe to us ko kya feel hota hai ye koi nahi samjh skta,or koi bhi likhane wala kabhi bhi kisi or ki rachna ko apna nahi kahta kyonki jo usne likha hai wo uske liye behad kimati hota hai.
or main aapke forum ki purani member hu CHARVI_BOHARA me hi hu,mene jab net par likhna shuru kiya tha tab sabse pahle YOINDIA hi join kiya tha bt itna time nahi de pai,isliye vempor(mann,vicky) ke kahane par mene MEDHA_JAIN3 ki nayi id banayi.
               Bura manna mujhe aata nahi ye sabse badi problem hai mere sath.

Medha jain

ek chhoti si koshish......

Khamoshiya.n toot si
Gai jab unhone
Apni palko.n ko uthaya
Mai hairan tha ki
Kaise unhone ab talak
Mujhse ye raj chhipaya
Roya karte the wo
Aksar chehare par
Nakaab dale
Or me samjha ki
Unhone sharm se
Apna chehara chhipaya

Jahan me swal tha
Ki wo roya kyo kiye?
Lab khule to
Unake hatho.n ko
Maine mere chehare
Pe paya
Kai javabo.n ko
Talash kar rhi thi
Unaki najre,
Unake is andaz se
Mene khud ko
Unljhano.n ke beech paya

Unhe khabar lag chuki thi
Humare ishaq ki
Meri khamoshi ne
Unako ye raz
Be-waqt bataya
Khush tha ki unhe
Khabar to lagi
Humare ishaq ki
Magar unhe kaise
Batata ki
"Khuda ne mujh
Bande ko yad farmaya”

Medha jain