Khawabon mein aakar...

by daljeet_faqeer on May 20, 2010, 12:27:25 PM
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Khawabon mein aakar mujhko satana
         sanam ye achchhi baat nahin hai,
Gham ke pal mein mujhko rulana
         sanam ye achchhi baat nahin hai.

Kaha tha humse tumne ik roz
         aayenge hum tumse milne,
waada karke mukar jaana
         sanam ye achchhi baat nahin hai.

Mohabbat mein shikwe gile to
         hote hain aur hote rahenge,
humse tera yun rooth jaana
         sanam ye achchhi baat nahin hai.

Mana humne ki thi shararat
         tumse mohabbat bhi karte hain,
saath chalkar yun chhod jaana
         sanam ye achchhi baat nahin hai.

Humse khafa ho to shikayat
         koi humein ilzaam do,
aashiqui mein yun dil jalana
         sanam ye achchhi baat nahin hai.

                         Daljeet'faqeer'
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2010, 12:40:32 PM »
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Itni safayi aur sunderta se likha hai..Bada masoom likha hai apne...Bahaut pyaar se apne ghum ka izhar kardia, shikayat ki apne mehboob se...bahaut pasand aya yeh kalam mujhe Daljeet jee... Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2010, 01:54:15 PM »
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agar kajal ki  khud ki aankh hoti
     to wo kisi aur ki aankh ka
        kajal na banti tearyeyed
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2010, 02:56:16 PM »
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I have to say exactly what my brother Rahim has said......
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