Khoon E dil maNge hatheli pe lagane Ke liye..By"Aarish"

by Aarish on June 27, 2012, 01:08:00 AM
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Apne hathoN ki hina aur rachane ke liye,

Khoon E dil maNge hatheli pe lagane Ke liye,

Usne dali haiN raqeeboN Ke gale main baheN,

Mujhko mehfil maiN sar E Aam jalane ke liye,

JaaN bhi jaye to chali jaye mujhe gham bhi nahi,

Naam E urdu ko mere Yaar bachane Ke liye,

Mujhko ghera hai meri maaN ki duaoN ne sada,

Varna dushman haiN bohut mujhko mitane Ke liye,

Saari mehfil hi ye Ghamgeen na ho jaye kahiN,

"Aarish"kehna na mujhe shair sunane ke liye,



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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2012, 03:18:42 AM »
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Apne hathoN ki hina aur rachane ke liye,

Khoon E dil maNge hatheli pe lagane Ke liye,

Usne dali haiN raqeeboN Ke gale main baheN,

Mujhko mehfil maiN sar E Aam jalane ke liye,

JaaN bhi jaye to chali jaye mujhe gham bhi nahi,

Naam E urdu ko mere Yaar bachane Ke liye,

Mujhko ghera hai meri maaN ki duaoN ne sada,

Varna dushman haiN bohut mujhko mitane Ke liye,

Saari mehfil hi ye Ghamgeen na ho jaye kahiN,

"Aarish"kehna na mujhe shair sunane ke liye,



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very very nice creation aarish jee
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2012, 03:22:36 AM »
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very nice arish ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2012, 03:39:53 AM »
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shukriya sahil jee bohut nawazish
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2012, 03:42:38 AM »
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bahut khoob betaa do sher ke beech double gap rakho ziyaadaa achhaa lagegaa
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«Reply #5 on: June 27, 2012, 03:55:20 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #6 on: June 27, 2012, 04:03:14 AM »
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bahut khoob arish saheb
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«Reply #7 on: June 27, 2012, 04:21:56 AM »
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bohut shukriya himanshu jee bohut nawazish
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«Reply #8 on: June 27, 2012, 05:27:27 AM »
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bahut hi umda likha aarish ji........aapki is kalam par dhero daad aur dhero bar mubarakbaad.........


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«Reply #9 on: June 27, 2012, 05:39:41 AM »
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bohut shukriya saudagar jee ...
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«Reply #10 on: June 27, 2012, 09:12:59 AM »
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achhi ghazal kahi hai , aarish ji . daad lijye.
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«Reply #11 on: June 27, 2012, 11:09:04 AM »
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Aarish Sahaab Aadaab!


janab aap bhi behad umdaa fankaar hai... aur aapki kalaameN
YO ki ronak meiN izaafa kar rahi hai... Usual Smile

Behad khoob gazal kahi hai janab... Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar
aik rahe... achche ahsaas O khayaal bune... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O
Mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 




Apne hathoN ki hina aur rachane ke liye,
Khoon E dil maNge hatheli pe lagane Ke liye,

Usne dali haiN raqeeboN Ke gale main baheN,
Mujhko mehfil maiN sar E Aam jalane ke liye,

JaaN bhi jaye to chali jaye mujhe gham bhi nahi,
Naam E urdu ko mere Yaar bachane Ke liye,

Mujhko ghera hai meri maaN ki duaoN ne sada,
Varna dushman haiN bohut mujhko mitane Ke liye,

Saari mehfil hi ye Ghamgeen na ho jaye kahiN,
"Aarish"kehna na mujhe shair sunane ke liye,



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«Reply #12 on: June 27, 2012, 06:46:50 PM »
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Waah waah waah, maza aa gaya padh ke. Bahut hi khoob likha hai Aarish bhai. Meri dili daad qubool kijiye.
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«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2012, 12:50:52 AM »
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shukriya parwaz bhai, ahmed bhai aur qais bhai aur puri yoindia family ka ,aap logon ki himmat afzai aur mohabbat ka sila hai wagarna meri shayri main rakha kuch nahi hai.. khuda kare ye mohabbat ke marasim sada yunhi shad o aabad raheN ;;  ek bar phir sabka shukriya .... khuda hafiz

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«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2012, 02:50:25 AM »
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EXTRA ORDINARY CREATION BRO......KEEP IT UP.
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