Khubsurat libaas..Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 13, 2011, 05:31:55 PM
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Behad khubsurat vo dulhan ka libas tha,
uski khubsurati ka bhi alag andaz tha,

vo merre karib hote hue bhi itna door tha,
jo aksar faaslo per bhi rehta paas tha,

vo nigaho mein bhar k mujhe nibhata raha bewafai ki har rasm ko,
waqai vo pehle wafadar dhokhebaaz tha,

ye pal khwab ban kyun merri ankho mein aya,
us raat ki tarah ye khayal bhi ek raaz tha,

badh chala vo kisi aur ki mehfil ki shaan ban'ne,
jiske haasil mein mujhe kabhi gurur tha kabhi naaz tha,

merri zindgi se rukhsati lete hue vo laut kar aya,
hum phir wahiin milenge ye uska mujhse akhri alfaz tha,

merra har nazara dhundhla ho gya per dil ne jaan liya,
vo merri mhbt ka anjam aur uski nayi zindgi ka aghaaz tha.........
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2011, 05:50:49 PM »
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aaj mera yaha aana succesful raha.
kuch dilkash khubsurat aur achhe kalaam mil gaye padhne ko.
sukriya dil se.
Geeta ji aapke iss kalaam me dard e judai aur Bewafai dono ka sangam lagta hai.
ehsaas bahut achhe hain.
khus rahiye
god bless u dear
sukriya.
fir kabhi aunga to aapke aur kalaamo se rubaru hone ka mauka milega
Take care
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2011, 06:09:21 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on February 13, 2011, 05:50:49 PM
aaj mera yaha aana succesful raha.
kuch dilkash khubsurat aur achhe kalaam mil gaye padhne ko.
sukriya dil se.
Geeta ji aapke iss kalaam me dard e judai aur Bewafai dono ka sangam lagta hai.
ehsaas bahut achhe hain.
khus rahiye
god bless u dear
sukriya.
fir kabhi aunga to aapke aur kalaamo se rubaru hone ka mauka milega
Take care

Bahut bahut shukriya killbill ji jab tak zindgi hai main yu hi likhti rahungi aur koshish karti rahungi apni likhne ki skills ko aur sudharati rahu..bahut shukriya sath dene ka...take care..
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2011, 06:14:52 PM »
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BBL jee Aadaab!

Aapke ahsaas O khayaal to waqai Masha Allah hai aur
aap unhe lafzon meiN bhi behad khoobi se dhalti hai..

Aapke is kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal bhi behad khoob
rahe...... Daad kabool kijiye... Usual Smile          



Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 13, 2011, 05:31:55 PM


Behad khubsurat vo dulhan ka libas tha,
uski khubsurati ka bhi alag andaz tha,

Masha Allah kia kahne hai jee Daad daad daad Usual Smile Behad khoob Matla kaha hai... Usual Smile          

vo merre karib hote hue bhi itna door tha,
jo aksar faaslo per bhi rehta paas tha,

Waah janab waah umdaa sher hai daad Usual Smile          

vo nigaho mein bhar k mujhe nibhata raha bewafai ki har rasm ko,
waqai vo pehle wafadar dhokhebaaz tha,

Is sher ke khayaal ke kia kahne achcha sher hai daad... Par aik baat kaheNge aapki jo pahela misra hai naa use thoda short kariye aur apne khayaal ka asar utna hi rahe aisa kahiye.. Usual Smile          

ye pal khwab ban kyun merri ankho mein aya,
us raat ki tarah ye khayal bhi ek raaz tha,

Oye hoye .... Kia kahne hai BBL jee Masha Allah kia sher kaha hai janaab behad umdaa shayari ki hai daad daad daad Usual Smile          

badh chala vo kisi aur ki mehfil ki shaan ban'ne,
jiske haasil mein mujhe kabhi gurur tha kabhi naaz tha,

Kia kahne hai jee waah ... Usual Smile          

merri zindgi se rukhsati lete hue vo laut kar aya,
hum phir wahiin milenge ye uska mujhse akhri alfaz tha,

Bada Ghumaawdaar sher hai yeH... achcha hai daad Usual Smile          

merra har nazara dhundhla ho gya per dil ne jaan liya,
vo merri mhbt ka anjam aur uski nayi zindgi ka aghaaz tha.........

Bahut khoob BBL jee Daad daad daad Usual Smile          



BBL jee Waqai aapki is kalaam ke aik aik ashar par dil se daad... Be IntehaaN khoob khayaaloN se labrez rahe aapke sabhi ashaar .....

Aur aisi umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne ke kia kaheN...
Is umdaa kalaam par bus waah aur daad hi de sakte hai..

Likhati rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye... Allah aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor bakhshe..

Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2011, 06:18:14 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 13, 2011, 06:14:52 PM
BBL jee Aadaab!

Aapke ahsaas O khayaal to waqai Masha Allah hai aur
aap unhe lafzon meiN bhi behad khoobi se dhalti hai..

Aapke is kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal bhi behad khoob
rahe...... Daad kabool kijiye... Usual Smile         



BBL jee Waqai aapki is kalaam ke aik aik ashar par dil se daad... Be IntehaaN khoob khayaaloN se labrez rahe aapke sabhi ashaar .....

Aur aisi umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne ke kia kaheN...
Is umdaa kalaam par bus waah aur daad hi de sakte hai..

Likhati rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye... Allah aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor bakhshe..

Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         




Bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji apke khubsurat alfzo  k liye...god bless u...take care...
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2011, 02:51:10 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 13, 2011, 05:31:55 PM
Behad khubsurat vo dulhan ka libas tha,
uski khubsurati ka bhi alag andaz tha,

vo merre karib hote hue bhi itna door tha,
jo aksar faaslo per bhi rehta paas tha,

vo nigaho mein bhar k mujhe nibhata raha bewafai ki har rasm ko,
waqai vo pehle wafadar dhokhebaaz tha,

ye pal khwab ban kyun merri ankho mein aya,
us raat ki tarah ye khayal bhi ek raaz tha,

badh chala vo kisi aur ki mehfil ki shaan ban'ne,
jiske haasil mein mujhe kabhi gurur tha kabhi naaz tha,

merri zindgi se rukhsati lete hue vo laut kar aya,
hum phir wahiin milenge ye uska mujhse akhri alfaz tha,

merra har nazara dhundhla ho gya per dil ne jaan liya,
vo merri mhbt ka anjam aur uski nayi zindgi ka aghaaz tha.........


Very Impressive ... Very Touching ..... broken Ji !

bahut umdaa ehsaasaat Pesh kiye hai aapne ... dil se daad !!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2011, 06:03:28 AM »
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kya baat hai geetji... dil tak chali gai ye rachna... chhu liya aapne gahare tak... bahut bahut daad

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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2011, 06:20:21 AM »
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kya baat he geet ji......

bahot hi khubsurat andaaj me .apni baat kahi he apne.....bahot aacha laga padkar .....maja aagaya....kuch esa hi kabhi lkiha tha mene .........


Me Karti Rahi Zulmo Sitam Wo Sahta Raha
Kuch Is Tarah Mohhabat Samja Gaya Mujko

Na Kaha Ek Lafj Bhi Usne Apne Hotho Se Kabhi
Jalim Najro Se Hi Apni Mohhabat Jata Gaya Mujko

Deta Tha Dua Muje Mere Diye Har Dard Par
Apne Ishq Ki Aag Me Kuch Yu Jala Gaya Mujko

Pahle Najar Ata Tha Galiyo Me Chouraho Per
Kal Raat Khwab Me Jaga Gaya Mujko

Ho Jaoungi Kisi Gair Ki Is Raat Ke Baad
Par Ee Khuda Us Diwane Ka Diwanapan To Dekh
Apne Hatho Se Wo Kambhakt …………………..
…………………………Dulhan Ke Liye Saja Gaya Mujko
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2011, 12:28:14 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji,naresh ji n manju mann ji....
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2011, 12:28:57 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 14, 2011, 06:20:21 AM
kya baat he geet ji......

bahot hi khubsurat andaaj me .apni baat kahi he apne.....bahot aacha laga padkar .....maja aagaya....kuch esa hi kabhi lkiha tha mene .........


Me Karti Rahi Zulmo Sitam Wo Sahta Raha
Kuch Is Tarah Mohhabat Samja Gaya Mujko

Na Kaha Ek Lafj Bhi Usne Apne Hotho Se Kabhi
Jalim Najro Se Hi Apni Mohhabat Jata Gaya Mujko

Deta Tha Dua Muje Mere Diye Har Dard Par
Apne Ishq Ki Aag Me Kuch Yu Jala Gaya Mujko

Pahle Najar Ata Tha Galiyo Me Chouraho Per
Kal Raat Khwab Me Jaga Gaya Mujko

Ho Jaoungi Kisi Gair Ki Is Raat Ke Baad
Par Ee Khuda Us Diwane Ka Diwanapan To Dekh
Apne Hatho Se Wo Kambhakt …………………..
…………………………Dulhan Ke Liye Saja Gaya Mujko

Bahut bahut shukriya utkarsh ji aur bahut khoob kalaam likha hai...
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2011, 08:53:05 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geeta JI bahut Hi sunder Aur Umda Likha Hai Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2011, 02:46:22 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya rishi ji..
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2011, 03:55:30 PM »
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behtareen post Geeta ji.
hazaron daad--
be happy always
sukriya
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«Reply #13 on: February 17, 2011, 04:03:22 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya killbill ji...
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