~*~Khuda Na Kar~*~

by pankshivam on March 21, 2009, 07:36:44 PM
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2009, 07:40:05 PM »
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Uski ummid abhi baki hai, ye aakhiri sanse abhi mujhse juda na kar...
Mera dard abhi taza hai,rahat abhi ada na kar...

Khamosh khada dekhta hun use, Ke ek ummid abhi baki hai...
Sanso ka karwa thamne laga hai, Par meri zidd abhi baki hai...

De gaya hai uska har dard mujhe kuch pal jeene ka sahara...
Bujhta diya sa rah gaya tha,bs lau timtati rahi dekhar uski ummid ka sitara...

Aaj sham dhale jab sans rukne lagi, fir uski yaad aayi...
Dard utha har bar, aur har bar dard me ek sans aayi...

Kaha har sans ne un sanson se,
Uski sanse in sanso se juda na kar...
Zindagi toh rahi nahi ab uske baigair...
Maut aane se pehle bhi na dekh pau use,
Aaisi muat meri ab khuda na kar...
~Pank~
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2009, 07:57:02 PM »
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Uski ummid abhi baki hai, ye aakhiri sanse abhi mujhse juda na kar...
Mera dard abhi taza hai,rahat abhi ada na kar...

Khamosh khada dekhta hun use, Ke ek ummid abhi baki hai...
Sanso ka karwa thamne laga hai, Par meri zidd abhi baki hai...

De gaya hai uska har dard mujhe kuch pal jeene ka sahara...
Bujhta diya sa rah gaya tha,bs lau timtati rahi dekhar uski ummid ka sitara...

Aaj sham dhale jab sans rukne lagi, fir uski yaad aayi...
Dard utha har bar, aur har bar dard me ek sans aayi...

Kaha har sans ne un sanson se,
Uski sanse in sanso se juda na kar...
Zindagi toh rahi nahi ab uske baigair...
Maut aane se pehle bhi na dekh pau use,
Aaisi muat meri ab khuda na kar...
~Pank~
Beautiful Pank jee...har kavita ke saath aap hume apni likhai ka deewana banate jate ho...bahaut gherai hai apke kalam main... Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2009, 08:20:06 PM »
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Nice one Shivam Ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 22, 2009, 02:46:17 AM »
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Nice work Shivam.....
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: March 22, 2009, 04:07:05 AM »
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Good .. Very Good Pank ji  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2009, 05:51:24 AM »
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Uski ummid abhi baki hai, ye aakhiri sanse abhi mujhse juda na kar...
Mera dard abhi taza hai,rahat abhi ada na kar...

Khamosh khada dekhta hun use, Ke ek ummid abhi baki hai...
Sanso ka karwa thamne laga hai, Par meri zidd abhi baki hai...

De gaya hai uska har dard mujhe kuch pal jeene ka sahara...
Bujhta diya sa rah gaya tha,bs lau timtati rahi dekhar uski ummid ka sitara...

Aaj sham dhale jab sans rukne lagi, fir uski yaad aayi...
Dard utha har bar, aur har bar dard me ek sans aayi...

Kaha har sans ne un sanson se,
Uski sanse in sanso se juda na kar...
Zindagi toh rahi nahi ab uske baigair...
Maut aane se pehle bhi na dekh pau use,
Aaisi muat meri ab khuda na kar...
~Pank~
Wah Pank Ji, Bahut khoob  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 22, 2009, 12:09:38 PM »
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Bahot hi khoob pank ji, ati sundar  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 22, 2009, 07:59:49 PM »
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Asmaji Roja ji Deepati Ji  Ghayal sahab, Rajesh ji, Rahim bhai
Aap Sabka Shukriya 
Maine Sirf Koishish Ki Aap Logo Tak Meri Koshish Pahuchi Iska Shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2009, 05:28:17 AM »
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Ur most welcome Pank bhaijan...aapki koshish safal rahi...
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