khush rehna !!!!!!!!!

by sarfira on June 15, 2013, 11:15:26 PM
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rulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna
bhulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna

meri nadaaniyon se rooth kar jaanewale
maut ki neend-------
sulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna

!!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2013, 11:33:01 PM »
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rulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna
bhulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna

meri nadaaniyon se rooth kar jaanewale
maut ki neend-------
sulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna

!!!!!!

Bahut Khoob Sf Ji..Likha To Accha Hai Aapne par aapki kalam Rukh Kyun gayi..

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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2013, 11:53:02 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on June 15, 2013, 11:33:01 PM
Bahut Khoob Sf Ji..Likha To Accha Hai Aapne par aapki kalam Rukh Kyun gayi..

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hahaha Khwahiah Sir
mera dimaag aur dil kai mahino se out of order h
mai kuch likhna chahta hun lekin likh hi nhi paata
ek 2 line ke bad aage hi nhi badhti meri kalam
ab to mene soch lia k iss bazm k layak mai hu hi nhi
bas saukiya taut pe ghumne aata hun

kuch achi ghazalon ke talaash me ghumta hoon yhan
sukoon milta h pashkr

aapki ghazal ne sukoon dia

thanx sirji
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2013, 11:56:22 PM »
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hahaha Khwahiah Sir
mera dimaag aur dil kai mahino se out of order h
mai kuch likhna chahta hun lekin likh hi nhi paata
ek 2 line ke bad aage hi nhi badhti meri kalam
ab to mene soch lia k iss bazm k layak mai hu hi nhi
bas saukiya taut pe ghumne aata hun

kuch achi ghazalon ke talaash me ghumta hoon yhan
sukoon milta h pashkr

aapki ghazal ne sukoon dia

thanx sirji

Nahi Bhai..Aap bahut accha likh sakte ho, Main yeh Jaanta Hoon Kyunki Maine aapko padha hai..Aaj nahi Kal Aapki Kalam To chalegi Hi..Jab Tak Intezaar Hai..Aur Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dost.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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Quote from: khwahish on June 15, 2013, 11:56:22 PM
Nahi Bhai..Aap bahut accha likh sakte ho, Main yeh Jaanta Hoon Kyunki Maine aapko padha hai..Aaj nahi Kal Aapki Kalam To chalegi Hi..Jab Tak Intezaar Hai..Aur Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dost.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2013, 12:43:41 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on June 15, 2013, 11:15:26 PM
rulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna
bhulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna

meri nadaaniyon se rooth kar jaanewale
maut ki neend-------
sulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna

!!!!!!


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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2013, 01:17:17 AM »
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wah wah wahhh wah

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WaaH WaaH Bahut khoob.........
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waah waah waah...
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«Reply #9 on: June 16, 2013, 12:45:47 PM »
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nice sarfira ji
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Quote from: sarfira on June 15, 2013, 11:15:26 PM
rulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna
bhulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna

meri nadaaniyon se rooth kar jaanewale
maut ki neend-------
sulaakar mujhe tu khush rehna

!!!!!!


BAHT KHOOB JI...BAHUT AACHA....
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thanx sirji
aapne mere in 2 ashaaron ko psnd Kia
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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2013, 08:37:52 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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