Koun aataa hai aadhi raat gaye?

by abdbundeli on August 07, 2008, 07:12:38 AM
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'Koun gaataa hai, aadhi raat gaye?
 Sabra jaataa hai, aadhi raat gaye?
 Ae meyrey dard-e-jigar!
 Intizaar aur na kar!!
 Koun aataa hai aadhi raat gaye?'
        
                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2008, 10:58:47 PM »
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Tumari Judai se kya kya na sikha hai
Pehle hasna aur phir rona sikha hai

Tumse hi  sab sikha hai
Dard mein hasna bhi
                           Tumari judai se sikha hai


Logo se Mohabbat karna
logo ke dard ko apna samjhna bhi
                            Tumari judai se sikha hai

Dard sehna, dard mein muskrana Aur
Tanhayi main rona bhi
                            Tumari judai se sikha hai

Har waqt tarapna
Raato ko uth uth ke rona bhi
                            Tumari judai se sikha hai...
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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2008, 11:47:05 PM »
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Mr. GRP/Abd beautiful lines.

hey khushi kiya likha he parh ke acha laga, very good.
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2008, 03:57:40 AM »
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khushi4pari ji,
Bahut achchey !

Kanta ji,
Shukriyaa!

        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2008, 09:05:33 AM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai Abd ji.. Applause

Bohat khoob likha hai khushi dear Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2008, 08:36:13 PM »
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thx 4 tareef Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2008, 08:39:11 PM »
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Good lines abd ji and beautiful expressions khushi4pari.
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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2008, 08:56:30 PM »
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Mujh Me Khushbu Basi Usi Ki Hai...
Jaise Yeh Zindagi Usi Ki Hai...

Wo Kahin Aas Pas Hai Mere..
Ho Na Ho Yeh Hansi Usi Ki Hai..

Ab To Yeh Khuwab Bhi Nahi Mere..
Ab To Yeh Neend Bhi Usi Ki Hai..

Ya To Koi Kami Nahi Mujh Me..
Ya Phir Mujh Me Kami Usi Ki Hai...
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«Reply #8 on: September 09, 2008, 04:56:29 AM »
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khushi4pari ji,
"Mujh Me Khushbu Basi Usi Ki Hai...
 Jaise Yeh Zindagi Usi Ki Hai...
 Wo Kahin Aas Pas Hai Mere..
 Ho Na Ho Yeh Hansi Usi Ki Hai..
 Ab To Yeh Khuwab Bhi Nahi Mere..
 Ab To Yeh Neend Bhi Usi Ki Hai..
 Ya To Koi Kami Nahi Mujh Me..
 Ya Phir Mujh Me Kami Usi Ki Hai.."

Waah kyaa hi khoob kahaa hai, khushi4pari ji!

 Shak naneen mujh ko: raah us ki hai!
 Chaahtaa hoon, pai, chaah us ki hai!
 Dard hai dil mein, 'abd', rooh ko bhi chain nahee:
 Mujhey patah hai, teestee karaah us ki hai!!
                                 - abd bundeli
 
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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2008, 10:23:05 AM »
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Bahut achha likha hai Abd ji aur khushi4pari.. Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2008, 11:39:47 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Abd Ji ... Khushi Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2008, 11:48:15 AM »
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Kaun aata hai aadhi raat gaye..
Jab jalte hain bekhwaab aankhon main,
    Beeti ruton ki yaadon ke diye.

Kaun gaata hai aadhi raat gaye..
Jab dard aankhon se rawaan ho,
   Dhadkanen machal jaayen seene main.

Kisi aahat ki aas par dil-e-betaab,
  Baar baar deta hai dilasa, koi aayega
  Kisi awaaz ko sunne ko beqaqar kare, lekin
  Aarzoo-e-bebasi ke siwaaye,
Kaun deta hai sadayen, aadhi raat gaye !!
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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2008, 01:47:47 PM »
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Bahut Khoob  Applause :clap:Celmira ji! Applause
Jab koyi aataa naheen, tab hi to 'woh' aataa hai!
Aur, houley sey, hamain khwaab mein ley jaataa hai!
Bhool jaatey hain dard saarey, giley shikwey bhi;
Kuchh khushee, kuchh haseen lamhey, hamein dey jaataa hai!!
                                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2008, 02:54:28 PM »
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sab ka great likha he celmira sis, Mr. GRP/Abd and khushi
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2008, 02:14:58 PM »
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Nice One Abd Ji,.
Kanta Ji,.
Talat Sis,.
Khushi,.
Sab Ne Achcha Likha Hai,.'Good Work,.
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