kuch adhure khwab...

by diya786 on February 17, 2008, 03:32:19 PM
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Aisa tha kabhi
apne the sabhi
sapne, lamhe khushiyon ka jahan
raste mein khadi phir humko mili
palkon ko nami
nazaron ko dhuan
ek aas bandhe dil ko hai yakeen
ek roz to hogi sahar yahan...
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2008, 08:09:17 AM »
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Diya ji,
Dekha jaaye toh kuchh nahin
sabhi Khwab adhoore he rehte hain
Haqikat sey jo wohh mil jaaye
tabhi poore hoate hain...
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2008, 11:03:09 AM »
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Nice ..zakhmola and diya.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2008, 09:38:38 AM »
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Very nice work Diya and Zakhmola..
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2008, 05:54:11 PM »
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Good one Diya and Zakhmola ji!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2008, 05:10:15 PM »
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Quote from: diya786 on February 17, 2008, 03:32:19 PM
Aisa tha kabhi
apne the sabhi
sapne, lamhe khushiyon ka jahan
raste mein khadi phir humko mili
palkon ko nami
nazaron ko dhuan
ek aas bandhe dil ko hai yakeen
ek roz to hogi sahar yahan...

Simple, deep very meaningful... Good work!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2008, 08:20:49 PM »
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Very nice Diya and Zakhmola
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2008, 12:58:31 PM »
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Nice One Diya Ji,.
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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2008, 01:08:27 PM »
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Adhoore Hain Khwaab Aaj Bhi, Jo Kabhi Humne Sajaaya Tha,.
Neend Ke Aagosh Mein Humne, Tumhe Khwabon Ki Malika Banaaya Tha,.

Ab To Bas Haqeeqat Ka Aaina Hai Saamne Apne "Jaanasheen",.
Toota Bhi To Doston Se, Dushmano Ne Kahaan Patthar Barsaaya Tha,.

Kaise Bhool Jaaye Hum Khwaabon Ki Haqeeqat Ko,.
Jab Har Ek Khwaab Ko Humne Palkon Ke Andar Dafnaaya Tha,.

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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2008, 04:48:16 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on February 17, 2008, 03:32:19 PM
Aisa tha kabhi
apne the sabhi
sapne, lamhe khushiyon ka jahan
raste mein khadi phir humko mili
palkon ko nami
nazaron ko dhuan
ek aas bandhe dil ko hai yakeen
ek roz to hogi sahar yahan...

Short but Too Nice..diya
Waise Kum likhte ho par badhiya hota aapka Likhna..

Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 21, 2008, 01:08:27 PM
Adhoore Hain Khwaab Aaj Bhi, Jo Kabhi Humne Sajaaya Tha,.
Neend Ke Aagosh Mein Humne, Tumhe Khwabon Ki Malika Banaaya Tha,.

Ab To Bas Haqeeqat Ka Aaina Hai Saamne Apne "Jaanasheen",.
Toota Bhi To Doston Se, Dushmano Ne Kahaan Patthar Barsaaya Tha,.

Kaise Bhool Jaaye Hum Khwaabon Ki Haqeeqat Ko,.
Jab Har Ek Khwaab Ko Humne Palkon Ke Andar Dafnaaya Tha,.

________________________________________-Jaanasheen-


Ohh..azeem miyaa,,,aap Jahaan aa Jaaye..wo Thread waqaee badhiya ban jata hai.
aisa koi Thread na hoga Jisme aapk ashaar Na Paaye jaaye..
waqaee badhiya andaaz rakhte ho,,janaab azeem bhai
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«Reply #10 on: November 14, 2008, 07:25:20 AM »
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shukriya Ashraf aapne bahut waqt diya apna meri shayari ko
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Shukriya raza Bhaijaan,.
ye Aapka karam hai Jo Aap Hamaari posts Ko Aksar Dekhte Ho,.
Shukriya Bhaijaan,.
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2009, 06:32:59 AM »
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good yaar
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Wah wah bahut khoob Kashish ji n Azeem bhai very beautiful creation,excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Wah wah bahut khoob Kashish ji n Azeem bhai very beautiful creation,excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Sis,.
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